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From: charlotte nc. us
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posted February 12, 2009 02:55 AM         

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Left a kiss on doorstep hoped he would find it by morning the same way i found his love making last night. He taught me how to make love outside of physical stroked my mental until i came into a thousand shooting stars too much for the heavens to contain. I need something to hold on to like a kiss like last night he tells me im beautiful not like superfical three second kisses and thirty second hugs that dont last long enough but beautiful like leaving a kiss on a doorstep.

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Your beauty is not limited to your outter shell but it is extended through your good nature

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posted February 12, 2009 07:44 AM         

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So passionate...

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posted February 12, 2009 01:06 PM         

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Delicious!

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posted February 12, 2009 09:43 PM         

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Yummy!

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posted February 13, 2009 11:58 AM         

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oooh thats so good!

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From: charlotte nc. us
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posted February 13, 2009 01:22 PM         

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I just wanted to thank everyone for the kind words

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posted February 15, 2009 10:31 PM         

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If I may say so, I really like the way you write, I wish I could write as you do. You write certain things the way I wish I could express them..but in truth I am afraid, so I explain what my heart is conveying in a "safe manner", which at many times leaves me sorrow filled....thanks for letting me explain..

Bless you

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From: charlotte nc. us
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posted February 15, 2009 11:18 PM         

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Wow what a beauutiful compliment! When im writing i try to write from an honest place. I just kind of let my thoughts take me where ever they want me to go. To be honest im kind of envious of your writing. You have a way with words your writing flows very well.

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posted February 15, 2009 11:43 PM         

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Your welcome~ as far as envious, I should be..you probably write something, and feel better or clearer afterwards..where as I sometimes feel frustrated..I'm good with words, but not with expression, that's the difference...a word is a common thing, an expression is everlasting...

Ohwell have a lovely evening, and thanks

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