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future_uncertain Knowflake Posts: 3226 From: ohio Registered: Aug 2004
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posted February 20, 2009 01:48 AM
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MysticMelody Moderator Posts: 5245 From: Registered: Dec 2005
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posted February 20, 2009 09:38 AM
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future_uncertain Knowflake Posts: 3226 From: ohio Registered: Aug 2004
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posted February 20, 2009 10:22 AM
Ahhhhhhhh, one of my many beloved vices: late night ramblings and cigarettes.Not my favorite part of me, but a very real one. Oh, well! IP: Logged |
MysticMelody Moderator Posts: 5245 From: Registered: Dec 2005
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posted February 20, 2009 10:56 AM
"You see… I’m on my last cigarette, and I’m trying to decide when to light it up. Instant gratification sounds nice, but waiting gives me some kind of noble cause.Except it’s not my cigarette. It’s yours." I decided she lit up here: "Only you thrive on that sh*t, so I suppose that it’s best if I just keep telling you the things you want to hear, to dumb it down so it’s clear." and it was still burning as her mind spoke the last words... so I felt it was a fitting image to the end of your excellent piece. IP: Logged |
MysticMelody Moderator Posts: 5245 From: Registered: Dec 2005
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posted February 20, 2009 11:00 AM
I thought about this one because it was as final as the last words and seemed fitting... but I felt the burning with the inevitable? end apparent was more precise.
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future_uncertain Knowflake Posts: 3226 From: ohio Registered: Aug 2004
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posted February 20, 2009 11:13 AM
Ohhhhhhhhhh... is that bit yours? I really like it!IP: Logged |