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future_uncertain
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posted February 20, 2009 01:48 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for future_uncertain     Edit/Delete Message
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MysticMelody
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posted February 20, 2009 09:38 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for MysticMelody     Edit/Delete Message

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future_uncertain
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posted February 20, 2009 10:22 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for future_uncertain     Edit/Delete Message
Ahhhhhhhh, one of my many beloved vices: late night ramblings and cigarettes.

Not my favorite part of me, but a very real one.

Oh, well!

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MysticMelody
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posted February 20, 2009 10:56 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for MysticMelody     Edit/Delete Message
"You see… I’m on my last cigarette, and I’m trying to decide when to light it up.
Instant gratification sounds nice, but waiting gives me some kind of noble cause.

Except it’s not my cigarette. It’s yours."

I decided she lit up here:

"Only you thrive on that sh*t, so I suppose that it’s best if I just keep telling you the things you want to hear, to dumb it down so it’s clear."

and it was still burning as her mind spoke the last words...

so I felt it was a fitting image to the end of your excellent piece.

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MysticMelody
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posted February 20, 2009 11:00 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for MysticMelody     Edit/Delete Message
I thought about this one

because it was as final
as the last words
and seemed fitting...

but I felt the burning
with the inevitable? end
apparent
was more precise.


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future_uncertain
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posted February 20, 2009 11:13 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for future_uncertain     Edit/Delete Message
Ohhhhhhhhhh... is that bit yours? I really like it!

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