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From: charlotte nc. us
Registered: Sep 2008

posted February 23, 2009 01:19 AM         

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I stumbled home tried to remember my own name picked up telephone wanted to talk to jesus but the line was busy asked reflection to keep me company she wanted to know if i was drunk i asked what you think? told me to stop going down to bar i was drinking my life away we're all dying right she asked but dont you want to die slowly shook my head just wanted another shot she asked you been down there thinking bout him i wanted to lie but emotions still lingered on breath touched her left cheek

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Registered: Dec 2005

posted February 23, 2009 11:48 AM         

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love all of these "moments" of yours

very palpable, deep, and sensual

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Registered: Nov 2006

posted February 23, 2009 09:19 PM         

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....like your words, very real.

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