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Topic: madness
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broken dream Knowflake Posts: 60 From: charlotte nc. us Registered: Sep 2008
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posted February 23, 2009 02:01 AM
I lay next to my sanity while resting in last nights soiled sheets where madness and i made love until we were both broken and he was reborn with a new name madness stripped me of my emotions and i stood still as the dead beneath his watchful gaze i am emotionally detached from my new lover last night left me fragmented into a thousand pieces sanity wants to make love to my mind and peace me back together again silent like my mother when she fell into gods arms i am lost inside my quiet passionIP: Logged |
broken dream Knowflake Posts: 60 From: charlotte nc. us Registered: Sep 2008
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posted February 23, 2009 02:16 AM
Do you think i fell from gods arms... his smell like fresh apples tears taste like honey i am a broken human that believes she use to be a fallen angel feathers spread out on blue sheets did they belong to madness or sanity? maybe they use to be my own! maybe madness and sanity share a body they look the same like broken humans and fallen angels i found myself in an unholy temple dancing an unholy dance with two men that looked the same Just a dream that was broken under the pressure of reality ------------------ Your beauty is not limited to your outter shell but it is extended through your good nature IP: Logged |
MysticMelody Moderator Posts: 5012 From: Registered: Dec 2005
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posted February 23, 2009 12:01 PM
you present these essences of truth that require thought and subjective interpretation and it is BEAUTIFUL art. beautiful, powerful art. i don't even want to comment because i feel my comment will interfere with the energy the reader will feel immediately after attempting to digest your work... but i want you to know your art is very appreciated.
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broken dream Knowflake Posts: 60 From: charlotte nc. us Registered: Sep 2008
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posted February 23, 2009 06:28 PM
Mysticmelody Thank you for the beautiful and kind words. The art that you post often inspires me and i appericiate the fact that all of you allow me to share.------------------ Your beauty is not limited to your outter shell but it is extended through your good nature IP: Logged |
Pearlty Knowflake Posts: 473 From: Registered: Nov 2006
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posted February 23, 2009 09:03 PM
I love both of those poems, so imaginative and lovely.. IP: Logged |