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From: charlotte nc. us
Registered: Sep 2008

posted March 04, 2009 08:34 PM         

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I asked why you wanna watch me suffer you my friend right get us another shot she said you gonna kill yourself tonight better to die with death on my breath than to slumber in the arms of heartbreak i remind her remember when i use to write poetry you use to look right through me another shot of truth im still looking right through you look at yourself fingers touch glass i smile shes just an illusion of who i use to be the real me died a lohg time ago in a hospital room

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posted March 05, 2009 05:53 PM         

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I just never have the words. So powerful and compact and says so much... with a punch! Its infused with this regret and bitterness and hopelessness... just SO much! You create this entire mood and ... I don't even have the words to accurately express even a fraction of what your work conveys. But it is sadly beautiful. ♥ Thank you so much for sharing.

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