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GypseeWind
Knowflake Posts: 839
From: Dayton,Ohio USA
Registered: May 2009
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posted June 03, 2009 01:49 PM
 
I can't let things come out of me
I need all the things I've got
springs, cogs, wires...What if the truth is not nice
what if the truth hurts?
Mother always says, if you've nothing
nice to say, then say nothing at all
maybe she just wants me to shut up
even still I've got lost to say my truth
is wiggly like a newborn
and slippery as a snake sometimes
it w h i s p h e r s
sometimes it SCEAMS
most of the time it is like a
"B" grade vampire movie Painting, stories, babies, vomit
these things come out of me
but I notice
what comes out is so much more interesting
than what goes in
and that
is a truth I can't face I would rather dream of myself in a field
full of things wildier than I
and when I
scream
nothing comes out but butterflies. `~gypsee~` IP: Logged |
cpn_edgar_winner
Knowflake Posts: 820
From: Toledo, OH
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted June 03, 2009 03:13 PM
yuppers. i understand you.
i like you, new girl.IP: Logged |
GypseeWind
Knowflake Posts: 839
From: Dayton,Ohio USA
Registered: May 2009
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posted June 03, 2009 03:28 PM
AW shucks. Thanks CPN!IP: Logged |
MysticMelody
Moderator Posts: 133
From:
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted June 04, 2009 11:58 AM
"Painting, stories, babies, vomit
these things come out of me"ROCK! I think it should be called "Vomit"
but that's just me  
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GypseeWind
Knowflake Posts: 839
From: Dayton,Ohio USA
Registered: May 2009
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posted June 04, 2009 02:46 PM
HAHAHAHAI will seriously consider that! I'm afraid though, that nobody would open a thread called "vomit." naah....they would outta curiousity. Well, I know I would! IP: Logged |
Broken
Knowflake Posts: 4
From:
Registered: May 2009
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posted June 04, 2009 08:29 PM
Very well written. Just wanted to let you know I like your style of writing. This was awesome!IP: Logged |
GypseeWind
Knowflake Posts: 839
From: Dayton,Ohio USA
Registered: May 2009
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posted June 05, 2009 11:29 AM
Thank you Broken, what a lovely compliment! p.s. I like your name Is is from the song? love that song. IP: Logged |
Broken
Knowflake Posts: 4
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Registered: May 2009
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posted June 09, 2009 01:00 AM
Hey Gypsee im glad you like the name. Nope it didnt come from the song and yes i love the song. My user name use to be broken dream but when i had to re-register so i just shortened it. Wow i that story sounds kinda boring maybe i should just say it came from the song?IP: Logged |
GypseeWind
Knowflake Posts: 839
From: Dayton,Ohio USA
Registered: May 2009
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posted June 09, 2009 10:49 AM
lol. Broken. Don't worry. Either way people will be intruiged!IP: Logged |
Yin
Knowflake Posts: 414
From:
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 24, 2009 11:44 AM
Love it.  IP: Logged |
teasel
Knowflake Posts: 145
From: Ohio
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 24, 2009 05:30 PM
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listenstotrees
Knowflake Posts: 344
From: Stonehenge
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 24, 2009 05:42 PM
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