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Topic: Loved
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Yin
Knowflake Posts: 579
From:
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 16, 2009 10:41 AM
 
One look is all it takes.
Is it your smile that kills the darkness in my soul a little bit with every breath?
Is it your brooding moods, you violent ups and downs, your fire?
What gives?Your lips so tender and so sweet,
Caressing mine
Like mother does a child
And lover drinking life from other lover's lips. Your gentle touch,
Your whispers,
Your desire
Stir up my soul
Ignite me
I am whole. You come to me
Your body - mine
And I am you
Completed, happy, loved.
The way you kiss me
Makes it all OK
The way you move in me
Is home.
Then I dissolve into a thousand waves
And pleasure takes its toll. IP: Logged |
cpn_edgar_winner
Knowflake Posts: 1404
From: Toledo, OH
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 16, 2009 11:12 AM
yummy!IP: Logged |
Yin
Knowflake Posts: 579
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Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 16, 2009 11:16 AM
Yes, cpn, that's a good word for it.
Thank you.IP: Logged |
Valus
Knowflake Posts: 1331
From:
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 16, 2009 11:37 AM
Beautiful
So beautiful, Yin.  IP: Logged |
Yin
Knowflake Posts: 579
From:
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 16, 2009 11:45 AM
Thank you, Valus. IP: Logged |
GypseeWind
Knowflake Posts: 1554
From: Dayton,Ohio USA
Registered: May 2009
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posted July 16, 2009 12:36 PM
Big smile from your friend, me!IP: Logged |
Yin
Knowflake Posts: 579
From:
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 16, 2009 05:26 PM
Yay, Gypseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!  IP: Logged |
charmainec
Moderator Posts: 144
From: on the other side of the rainbow
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 17, 2009 03:05 PM
Oh yes I like  IP: Logged |
Quinnie
Knowflake Posts: 143
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Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 21, 2009 06:18 PM
Excellent stuff... I really like this line..."And lover drinking life from other lover's lips."IP: Logged |
Yin
Knowflake Posts: 579
From:
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 21, 2009 07:25 PM
Thank you kindly.IP: Logged |
listenstotrees
Knowflake Posts: 471
From: Stonehenge
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 23, 2009 04:20 PM
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T
Knowflake Posts: 1144
From:
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 27, 2009 08:41 AM
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