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charmainec
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From: on the other side of the rainbow
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posted February 08, 2011 05:35 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for charmainec     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
You are the melody that speaks to me
When the whispers of the day fade away
And I drift into the ethers of your magnetizing vortex
of unraveled
spirals..

that spins frantically, not wanting me to see what they contain within their coils
the colors that emanate beauty and catch my I as they race by..

my hand reaches out trying to capture a piece
even if a tiny thread..

but before I get too close
Im struck by an electric jolt
The reality dawns

Im back in my bed..

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Randall
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posted February 08, 2011 12:40 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Great imagery!

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"Cooking is like love. It should be entered into with abandon or not at all." Harriet Van Horne

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SunChild
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posted February 08, 2011 10:44 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for SunChild     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Oooh lovely lovely lovely

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Its an interesting thing. Seeing Kuan Yin relating to a flower so intently. She's not just looking at it; she's interacting with itIm seeing how the act of relating to a flower appears to be so simple. Yet, it takes a tremendous amount of courage to make such a simple act important. Now, the lotus is floating away.

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charmainec
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posted February 09, 2011 03:24 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for charmainec     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thanks guys.The poem contains much symbolism.

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