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Topic: To the Vagabond
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Faith Knowflake Posts: 4596 From: Registered: Jul 2011
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posted December 19, 2012 09:09 AM
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pippastrelle Knowflake Posts: 189 From: Registered: Nov 2012
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posted December 19, 2012 09:21 AM
Beautiful poem, Faith, very touching. Lovely arrangement of words too, love it IP: Logged |
Swift Freeze Knowflake Posts: 301 From: One World Registered: Nov 2009
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posted December 20, 2012 05:31 AM
Hello FaithYour writing contains a depth of emotion which is part of the words and flow. What I mean is, I feel like you wrote this with the emotion inside you and you let it flow through into the words. It is very touching, and a chilling end. I understand if it is something personal or something you don't want to mention or talk about. Though I am curious as to what moves you so, to write a piece so full of lament. I wish you all the best Faith. - Chris ------------------ Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams. IP: Logged |
Faith Knowflake Posts: 4596 From: Registered: Jul 2011
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posted December 20, 2012 08:03 AM
Hi Chris,I appreciate your perception. I have an 8H Pisces moon ruling my 12H. I can tell when someone is just passing through my life. But with Saturn in my 12H opposing Mercury, I can't get a finer sense of when or how they will leave. The fact that I get deeply attached to people is actually pretty common for Capricorn. The fact that I will let people go without openly making a fuss or resorting to manipulative tactics seems the only dignified way to handle it...and is also common for Capricorn. That's how I see it...thanks for asking IP: Logged |
Faith Knowflake Posts: 4596 From: Registered: Jul 2011
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posted December 20, 2012 08:34 AM
quote: Originally posted by pippastrelle: Beautiful poem, Faith, very touching. Lovely arrangement of words too, love it
Thanks so much. I wasn't sure this would make any sense. IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 1049 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted January 02, 2013 01:29 PM
quote: Originally posted by Faith: Thanks so much. I wasn't sure this would make any sense.
Oh yes, it does... {{{ }}} IP: Logged |
taureau20 Knowflake Posts: 88 From: Registered: Dec 2012
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posted January 07, 2013 04:26 PM
semantics... the answer... beautiful poem...IP: Logged |
SaturnineMoth Knowflake Posts: 2207 From: Gaea's Omphalos Registered: Aug 2012
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posted January 08, 2013 05:47 AM
^^ <3 IP: Logged |