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Topic: Ashes
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pippastrelle
Knowflake Posts: 186
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Registered: Nov 2012
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posted March 19, 2013 07:37 AM
  
Ashes
Light extinguished, glimmer defeated,
spread across my heart a sacred scar
the oxygen of time a cliched healer,
locked in a cage my joy hath retreated.Ashes of you in every word that I mutter,
shadows of you held captive in my mind
memories of oneness, complete sublimeness
butterfly in Spring, glistening wings all aflutter. Butterfly has flown, my heart cannot reason,
darkness surrounds my veil of tears,
hoping in vain, void of logic or sensibility
the flutterer will return another season.
Barb
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Faith
Knowflake Posts: 4251
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Registered: Jul 2011
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posted March 19, 2013 10:57 PM
Thank you for feeding my soul tonight, Barb. I always enjoy your poetry, and I needed this. I was craving something poignant and sad...this hits the spot.  
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Swift Freeze
Knowflake Posts: 273
From: One World
Registered: Nov 2009
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posted March 20, 2013 04:35 AM
I know I wait for my butterfly also =)- Chris ------------------
Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams. IP: Logged |
pippastrelle
Knowflake Posts: 186
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Registered: Nov 2012
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posted March 20, 2013 07:38 AM
thanks for the commments, peeps, appreciated IP: Logged |
mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 754
From: us
Registered: May 2012
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posted March 26, 2013 01:06 AM
Beauty... for your Ashes May your joys return some way  IP: Logged |
pippastrelle
Knowflake Posts: 186
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Registered: Nov 2012
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posted March 28, 2013 08:51 AM
Thank you, Mirage IP: Logged |
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