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pippastrelle
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posted March 19, 2013 07:59 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for pippastrelle     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
This is the remembrances of a child moving home. As a child i was blissfully unaware about the hardships of life, as children usually are; cocooned in their childhood innocence and carefree abandon. Conversely other family members took the move very badly and it was a gut wrenching experience for them, sad and quite traumatic. But the new abode proved to be a happy home, so everything worked out for the best.

The Move

Biting, squalid, pitch hued November morn,
concrete pavement, hopscotch feet
dancing merrily o'er white chalked squares
not a care but for the moment,
haven of innocence and juvenile dares.

A wearisome mother in step with petulant brother
toting boxes and cases o'er sleet battered cobbles
clutching fiercely paltry worldly treasures
expressionless faces, resigned, automatons,
far cry from habitual good natured squabbles.

Jess, the old mutt, still chained to the fence
a token last protest from a canine suffragette,
liberated, now bouncing into the rear of the van
stacked high with all manner of household contraption
on threadbare old blankets his caninity takes rest.

Three pairs of eyes peer fixedly through the windows
as the van moves cantankerously along the well worn road
old house standing stoically amongst its companion stragglers
like sporadic teeth in a gaping decayed mouth
mother sheds a tear and brother blasts the radio to lighten the load.

by Barb


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Faith
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posted March 19, 2013 10:51 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Faith     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

I love how you are so in touch with all the vivid details, reviving your memories and breathing new life into them. Inspiring!

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pippastrelle
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posted March 20, 2013 09:06 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for pippastrelle     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thanks, faith, it's strange ,I agree, how I can remember past events in detail. It's probably because it was a significant event in my childhood, one of many.

So glad you enjoyed it !

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mirage29
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posted March 26, 2013 12:46 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
pippastrelle, Again, your descriptions take me there! .... craftsmanship! texture! color! so real ...

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