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From: Love Street, she lingers long on Love Street..
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posted March 31, 2013 12:09 AM            

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In dreaming there is blissful innosense
far from the draining constraining
Reel time

A foggy fuzzy place
where anything can happen
and usually does

Kaleidoscope images of your face
of places
that we go, that we've been
tumble and overlap
and press replay again

This love tests the limits
of all I think is real
and all the things I feel
and have ever felt

You live beneath my pounding heart
and are alive behind my eyes
in technicolor brilliance
I press pause
because
I love you in the still.

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posted March 31, 2013 01:45 PM            

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Wow

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posted April 01, 2013 08:24 AM            

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It's truly beautiful.

- Chris

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Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams.

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posted April 01, 2013 11:39 AM            

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Brilliant poem!

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From: Love Street, she lingers long on Love Street..
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posted April 02, 2013 04:11 PM            

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Thank you so much for reading; Cancer/Scorpio, SwiftFreeze and pippastrelle.

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posted April 04, 2013 06:58 PM            

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That's really nice!

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From: Love Street, she lingers long on Love Street..
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posted April 06, 2013 12:22 PM            

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Thank You for reading, Mirage. <3

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posted April 08, 2013 04:44 PM            

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nice poem..!

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