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Topic: "The Feeling that Kills" and all my other poems
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RunAroundScreaming Moderator Posts: 6913 From: Registered: Oct 2010
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posted April 07, 2013 04:34 PM
"I'll Tell You a Tale" Oh how grim. Isn't that the most morose you've ever been? I'll tell you a tale dipped with folly. A refreshing tale of melancholy. You'll shed a tear but want to hear more. As soon as the grizzly eats the family whole. As soon as the fisherman gets lost at sea. Because the best tales are those of tragedy. "Searching" What is it we're searching for In a piano piece In a kiss In holding someone's hand
In a pill Is it a thrill An escape to a magical nowhere land? A little drop of potion Running through our veins A potion so potent as to take away all pain A tinkle of high A carefully crafted lullaby As each note hits a higher nerve Progressively speeding The heavenly fumes that send our heart reeling The rush of belonging Of finally being free Being loved the way it's meant to be Having all your dreams come true What would you give? what would you do.... If I said it's already inside you?
"The World is Much Better in Verse" The world is better in verse
Let’s traverse All of humankind, With the swipe of a pen Let us sweep Through every human mind With the hint of a spark That lights a fire in men I know not What I’ve seen not I feel not What isn’t a part of me And this is the tragedy, That you might not see what I see In my poetry Words plucked right out from the air So much so they’re barely there Each little line so very terse Yet the world is still much better in verse. "Endless" I never realized how endless the sea looked How vastly the night sky stood How grand the world was The floor such an open space The turn of a corner such an exciting place Until I longed for each inch of it to be Where next I'd walk into your embrace "Love Bug" There's a hurt in my side There's a pain in my spleen It's an invisible little bugger, most painful thing you've ever seen. He's crawling around. Now he's exiting my rib And crawling right into my heart, thumping something mean He won't leave me alone He won't let me be He makes my body ache Soon as it's you I see. He tickles my tongue And makes me trip up He tickles my knees And won't let me stand up He grows wings and flutters around in my tummy He sends a shockwave through my veins Makes my arms numb makes my palms wet And makes me feel like a dummy He gets in my eye and makes me blink really fast Goes in my mouth and Gives me pursed lips soon as you pass I've tried to get rid of that little guy But he quickly comes back soon as you walk by Making me dour And nothing will get rid of him Except a cold shower A good night's sleep Or studying for hours. So before you wonder what happened to me Just realize the little guy loves finding other people to bug So I'll fix my hair, look posh as I can, smile your way And if you walk by again, you might catch the bug! IP: Logged |
RunAroundScreaming Moderator Posts: 6913 From: Registered: Oct 2010
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posted April 07, 2013 04:36 PM
The rest are here ^____^ http://singingspindle.deviantart.com/ IP: Logged |
Swift Freeze Knowflake Posts: 329 From: One World Registered: Nov 2009
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posted April 08, 2013 02:08 PM
I see your writing is a way to express yourself. I found a fair few of these pieces beautifully constructed. I would say i'm sorry for the pain you've been through, but then that's what comes through in the writing, for a lot of us. Not just pain, the whole spectrum of emotion.Thank you very much for sharing, I will check out your deviant art collection. - Chris ------------------ Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams. IP: Logged |
taureau20 Knowflake Posts: 102 From: Registered: Dec 2012
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posted April 08, 2013 07:06 PM
nice poems... you have craft. keep writing! i see you're studying... waking nights up and writing all the stuff eh! good! IP: Logged |
RunAroundScreaming Moderator Posts: 6913 From: Registered: Oct 2010
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posted April 08, 2013 09:28 PM
Aw thank you Swift Freeze, for saying that about the pain that shows in the poems. I'm a cancer sun with 3 planets in leo so im pretty emotional my life is probably one imagined drama after the otherThankyou very much for your nice comments Taureau, yes! Haha! Sleepless nights up studying then going to bed tryina fall asleep .....should be easy but its surprisingly hard. :P IP: Logged |
taureau20 Knowflake Posts: 102 From: Registered: Dec 2012
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posted April 09, 2013 04:04 PM
"Because that’s what love is, and I’ve felt it before And this here This here, is not love."Hey but everything is love, everything... IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 1293 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted April 10, 2013 11:59 PM
...thankyou so much for your artistryYou said: Sleepless nights up studying then going to bed tryina fall asleep .....should be easy but its surprisingly hard. :P Which was the hard part...? trying to fall asleep? (just kidding!) I know that capturing words can be just as hard as the job of falling asleep sometimes... but sleep is needed! What I think is hardest... is to be "struck" somewhere inbetween the two! oh, arrrgh!!  IP: Logged |
RunAroundScreaming Moderator Posts: 6913 From: Registered: Oct 2010
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posted April 11, 2013 06:34 PM
^ Thank you for the nice wordsIP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 29466 From: Saturn next to Charmainec Registered: Apr 2009
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posted May 23, 2013 10:28 AM
Loves them!IP: Logged |
RunAroundScreaming Moderator Posts: 6913 From: Registered: Oct 2010
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posted June 07, 2013 09:26 PM
Woo! Thank you Randall  Here are some more for those who missed the deviantart link http://singingspindle.deviantart.com/ Pain Deep inside the dark of hell I hear a voice i know as well The hounds bark loud But ne’er pray tell They remind you life just once was swell A painful cry A frightful sound I hear them calling all around The drip of blood The beauty of pain How hearts can squeeze out all they gain A monstrous hole A gaping wound How i wish i was now in June A fatal stab Right in my jugular vein But here the sputtering Still remains As happiness i find in its joyful pain And while from self destruction i still refrain I see that being hurt can only cause me one thing ——forgiveness. Fake The world is cold It’s been since times old We’re sinners by nature Looking for pleasure To make our pain lesser Sexual addiction Drug addiction Pleasure addiction Mind over matter Mind over manners Follow each other Wherever other goes Just to have friends We’d throw out our soul Just to feel cool We’ll support almost anything Mind over matter But who’s in control? Where will you be when you can’t find love From all your mind numbing And reckless decisions The allure of the thrill Experience over innersperience Shock value over reality That happiness you’re seeking ——-is it real?
But You Showed Up Today was supposed to be a wonderful day But you showed up With your sadistic ways Today was supposed to be beautiful and free But you showed up, with some mean comment for me Today I was supposed to feel carefree and anew But you came with your seriousness and made it blue Today I felt happy, just being me And I thought you might celebrate, too
But being happy isn't happy with you. http://singingspindle.deviantart.com/ IP: Logged |
Venus Moderator Posts: 1747 From: Registered: Mar 2011
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posted June 14, 2013 01:33 AM
these poems tickled my "jugular vein"..  really, good job! how have you been runsaround??
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Venus Moderator Posts: 1747 From: Registered: Mar 2011
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posted June 14, 2013 01:36 AM
quote: Originally posted by taureau20: "."Hey but everything is love, everything...
hmmm.. i like this! IP: Logged |
RunAroundScreaming Moderator Posts: 6913 From: Registered: Oct 2010
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posted June 15, 2013 02:14 AM
Heeeey. Long time  You still into fashion and stuff? IP: Logged |
RunAroundScreaming Moderator Posts: 6913 From: Registered: Oct 2010
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posted June 15, 2013 02:14 AM
Heeeey. Long time  You still into fashion and stuff? IP: Logged |
Venus Moderator Posts: 1747 From: Registered: Mar 2011
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posted June 15, 2013 07:22 AM
Haha u bet ! I still check ur tumbler frequentlyIP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 29466 From: Saturn next to Charmainec Registered: Apr 2009
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posted June 16, 2013 11:22 AM
*feels like a fly on the wall*IP: Logged |
RunAroundScreaming Moderator Posts: 6913 From: Registered: Oct 2010
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posted July 02, 2013 02:02 AM
quote: Originally posted by Venus: Haha u bet ! I still check ur tumbler frequently
xDDD Nothing could make me happier! It's time to do away with that horrible hipster fashion =X I bet you'd like Mariannan! http://mariannan.costume.fi
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RunAroundScreaming Moderator Posts: 6913 From: Registered: Oct 2010
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posted July 02, 2013 02:05 AM
quote: Originally posted by Randall: *feels like a fly on the wall*
Don't! IP: Logged |
Venus Moderator Posts: 1747 From: Registered: Mar 2011
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posted July 02, 2013 09:42 AM
i loves it x_xIP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 29466 From: Saturn next to Charmainec Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 02, 2013 10:17 AM
Great stuff.IP: Logged |