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posted June 25, 2013 10:01 AM            

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Reality

Oh' I could have never
handed over my heart
or shared life complete
you left me- at my worse fate
without manners of any kind
when I needed love the most
right then and there
I knew your tattered worth
through my own despair.

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posted July 06, 2013 01:11 PM            

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posted July 07, 2013 08:29 PM            

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Dark and beautiful, I love it!

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posted July 08, 2013 03:47 AM            

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Thank you Pearlty, it is hauntingly beautiful.

- Chris

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Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams.

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posted July 08, 2013 03:50 PM            

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Thanks..

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posted July 09, 2013 09:59 AM            

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Sad, which is good.

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posted July 10, 2013 02:29 AM            

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Those kinds of lessons cost much! Mirrors the worth of a Self... and Reflects self-worth. Love-worthiness... Reality can sense cold.

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posted July 10, 2013 01:59 PM            

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Randall.. "sad which is good"
I agree, it is at times.

Mirage..I'm happy you understand the poem, thanks for your thoughts.

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posted July 10, 2013 06:16 PM            

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Pearlty... thank you sooo much for your poem, again. I want you to know how your work struck something deep inside of me, helping to heal and deal with pains of the past.

http://www.linda-goodman.com/ubb/Forum17/HTML/002712.html

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posted July 10, 2013 06:24 PM            

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posted July 11, 2013 10:54 AM            

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Mirage..It is the pinnacle of poetry to feel helpful, you're welcome. I must also insist on reciprocating a gracious thanks extended towards you as well.

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posted July 11, 2013 03:40 PM            

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