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Topic: Dreams of Passion
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Sailor Gemini
Knowflake Posts: 148
From: Magellan Castle, Venus
Registered: Mar 2013
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posted September 07, 2013 04:07 PM
  
Dreams of Passion
I want to see him in my dreams tonight
To lie in beds of Rose and Thistles red
Oh come, my love of dark and horrid might
To dash through forests black in heaven’s dreadA Sunny day keeps me away from him
It is a call of Moons I wish to send;
If it was so, I’d cry on whims so vim…
Alas, to curse this rule so cruel, I tend. When night appears again, I pray to see
His face once more, I ask my Goddess so
By now my dream is cast; he comes to me!
He seemed depressed; I do not care for woe. His grasp is reassuring me he cares;
We only meet with starlit nights and airs I wrote this after a few dreams of this mysterious person. I hope we can meet one day.   ------------------
And it was just getting interesting... IP: Logged |
Pearlty
Knowflake Posts: 152
From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012
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posted September 08, 2013 12:40 PM
 I liked this one! very pretty. IP: Logged |
Sailor Gemini
Knowflake Posts: 148
From: Magellan Castle, Venus
Registered: Mar 2013
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posted September 08, 2013 08:32 PM
Thanks!------------------
A killer 'lady', sinful as the perfect liar, but sweeter than the sweetest devil. IP: Logged |
Randall
Webmaster Posts: 32263
From: Saturn next to Charmainec
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted September 09, 2013 12:00 PM
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mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 1788
From: us
Registered: May 2012
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posted September 10, 2013 03:58 AM
He's a living part of you Nice descriptions! IP: Logged |
Sailor Gemini
Knowflake Posts: 148
From: Magellan Castle, Venus
Registered: Mar 2013
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posted September 10, 2013 06:55 PM
What makes you say that?IP: Logged |
mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 1788
From: us
Registered: May 2012
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posted September 11, 2013 03:15 AM
What makes me say that about your poem, Sailor Gemini?It's just an 'overall' over-arching impression... The energy seems primordial... Like the masculine-feminine within your soul are in an inner mating. Wrestling for preeminence... but are inside you. Where these forces meet inside you?, the 'attraction' or magnet calls something to meet or match it into your life? (That's just the sense I got. I could be wrong...... Your choice of 'words' were rich and deep and lush.) Reminded me of this soulish wrestling-grasping for supremacy, like intense feeling in Rachmaninoff. Clip of movie, Shine. (music.clip) David training for Rach 3 (movie: Shine) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BXTH0QIC1LE How do you feel about what I said? Any fit to it? Is what I'm saying too strong?
(okay....I just noticed: I see the 'blushing' smilie there afterwards...
I'm not sure of your age now, oh my? ...Thank you for sharing your dream... You are sweetly very daring! I hope and wish you meet just the right person, and feel nourished and completed. Enjoy your Feelings, Enjoy your Life!.... much love to you! ) IP: Logged |
Sailor Gemini
Knowflake Posts: 148
From: Magellan Castle, Venus
Registered: Mar 2013
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posted September 11, 2013 06:11 PM
I see, that makes sense. Thanks!------------------
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