Posts: 906
From: Hillsboro, OR, USA
Registered: Jan 2013

posted October 03, 2013 09:21 PM            

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I'm going off on a limb here with this poem, haven't thought about what to call it,

Go from me now please,
Because I don't want your disease,
Of this horrid fate you have bound me to,
In which I strive to undo,
The dragon will roar with fire,
And make the princess beg so dire,
But what will I be, my love so true?
When your gallantry is dead and threw?

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From: us
Registered: May 2012

posted October 04, 2013 04:50 PM            

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WhiteWitch111.... great imagery and gosh, I can feel that palpable struggle--- It's The Princess' Choice! She has new clarity. She is aware that she can influence her fate. There's a new ending to an old problem that hasn't worked for her until NOW... higher purpose will prevail, BECAUSE "She" chooses, consciously!

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From: Hillsboro, OR, USA
Registered: Jan 2013

posted October 20, 2013 08:10 AM            

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Wow Mirage...that actually kind of describes where I went with it, hehe. See my mind is not consciously aware of what I'm saying when I sit down to write, it's more like my soul is writing, and sometimes the poem ends up not where I wanted it to go at all, but still sounds equally beautiful.
Anyway thank you for your appreciation of my poetry?
Have you written anything on here? Would love to read some of your things.

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From: Saturn next to Charmainec
Registered: Apr 2009

posted October 21, 2013 12:25 PM            

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