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Topic: I might add on to it...
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Sailor Gemini
Knowflake Posts: 386
From: Magellan Castle, Aphrodite Terra, Venus
Registered: Mar 2013
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posted October 23, 2013 12:23 AM
  
This is who I am outside.
I might add on, if I feel up for it.Solitaire Princess
Sailor Gemini
Out into an icy sky and calm black seas, I stare with the eyes of a cat
You approach me?
Don’t even try to read my thoughts then
And with a cut sharper than glass, slash off Time
You want to act cold?
Bad move; an icy needle for you
Wait… you like it? Want more?
I’m bored now.
Don’t misunderstand.
I won’t say I like you
You should never expect me to admit it
I’m a distant girl I gaze into the garnet jewels
Take me away from here, I say
Silence.
Are you even listening?
Out there?
I’d rather not
I have only you
But it’s too shameful for me to say
Contradicting?
Maybe
Don’t get the wrong idea!
I’m just a Solitaire Princess ------------------
L'amour d'Aphrodite et un choc de beauté~ IP: Logged |
Pearlty
Knowflake Posts: 214
From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012
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posted October 25, 2013 05:54 PM
Nicely written 
This depicts a somewhat hardened exterior, makes one wonder what's going on- on the inside 
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mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 2002
From: us
Registered: May 2012
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posted October 29, 2013 09:20 PM
Sassy!  IP: Logged |
Randall
Webmaster Posts: 34117
From: Saturn next to Charmainec
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted October 31, 2013 02:19 PM
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Randall
Webmaster Posts: 34117
From: Saturn next to Charmainec
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted November 01, 2013 01:40 PM
Has attitude.IP: Logged |
Sailor Gemini
Knowflake Posts: 386
From: Magellan Castle, Aphrodite Terra, Venus
Registered: Mar 2013
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posted November 01, 2013 05:07 PM
Thanks! ^_^
Here's another part
This is my SpiritsFluttering Spirits
Sailor Gemini
The high noontide and a lovely breeze
A butterfly flutters; wait, there’s another!
I pass the gardens, lined up with lilies and roses
Another group of them!
Through the markets
Past the schools
Into new people
Follow them into the time
Watch the brilliant Sunset
And another journey back home
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Pearlty
Knowflake Posts: 214
From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012
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posted November 08, 2013 06:40 AM
I love your second part as well- feels so light, airy, and free spirited. IP: Logged |
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