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Topic: thoughts of venus square pluto with moon in 7th
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FullerIdeas
Newflake Posts: 14
From: London
Registered: Feb 2014
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posted February 10, 2014 01:05 PM
  
this is stuff i get bombarded with while i do my mundane job and helplessly try to figure out wtf is up with me and my brain. not the best poems but as there kinda just reeled off i dont think there that bad. grammer is terrible im always rushing as there kinda just thoughts so its all phonetic to me.
i cant stand on my own two feet
because they have sunk right deep beneath
melting from the intense heat, i explete
no release,
pressure building, it red bars steam screech!
intensity has reached its peak
pause.... no retreat
what am i supposed to learn from this i cant think!
no support no guidance im on the brink...
face sinks my world shrinks
longing for the one i lost i wont let the love become extinct...
my depleted mind marred and jaded
but my memeories are far from faded
secretly living in past memories
where ill forever be, free
a life lesson i cant understand
saturns returned and i feel less then a man
whats the point in learning the answer to create a plan,
if i cant share it with that one woman
i cant let go but everyone says i can....
goosebumps and shiver
happyness given through a cold quiver
like im touched by her soul and its still whispering..... come hither
but i cant help think im looking in the mirror
self betrayal im the bewitcher
cos she already told me 100 times...
i dont want to be with ya....
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mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 2373
From: us
Registered: May 2012
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posted February 11, 2014 04:49 AM
Really like your poem, FullerIdeas! (They can put away those harps, because you plan on living a long good life. Isn't it a fantastic opportunity how your mind is freed up enough to be doing your manual work while testing out the dreams, imaginations, and ideas in your brain while you're hard at the job...? Now those are really 'lucky' positions to get. When I had opportunities like that, it gave my muse a little sidebar time off to be by herself. Then she'd come back to me and show another nifty piece or line of an idea!Work has not stopped your Art! Blooming where you're planted! Making the best of times be even better! The time will come forward where your Gift will make room for you--- Saturns make Real Men~~ dedicated, disciplined, ready to under harships-- and underscore and give shape and form to the Dreams of Life. Real Men recite Poetry to their Lady or fellow lad...  IP: Logged |
FullerIdeas
Newflake Posts: 14
From: London
Registered: Feb 2014
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posted February 11, 2014 01:29 PM
wow thank you. first person to react positively to my poems. thanks makes me feel understood. Funny enough a day later in the cancer moon i talked to someone who triggered something that gave me the opportunity to write a happier poem which was a great release as i feel how i write if that makes sense.
hopefully ill get a chance to write some more and enjoy other peoples in this forum.
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mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 2373
From: us
Registered: May 2012
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posted February 11, 2014 02:27 PM
^ How cool, FullerIdeas! 
.... I can hardly wait! Jump in with both feet! Feel the freedom to reflect your HeART!  IP: Logged |
Pearlty
Moderator Posts: 367
From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012
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posted February 12, 2014 01:15 PM
I liked this too! Hope you share more.  IP: Logged |
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