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Topic: Tipping Edge
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FullerIdeas
Newflake Posts: 16
From: London
Registered: Feb 2014
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posted February 23, 2014 03:50 PM
  
this is how i felt tonight after what seems forever that Ive been in a right mess lately. here's hoping the tipping point pushes me the right way. through sheer grit determination
or through the ignorant blindness to ones self preservation
hunched stricken but excitedly open armed with anxious trepidation i am a mount the tip of the mountain gazing
through tunneled vision peering eyes with a glare blazing
memories erasing, dream chasing
could life really be amazing? tipping on blistered toes, balance swaying between many of the same being
ones lonely self asks what should i be believing?
as one voice comes another one is leaving
which one is deceiving? IP: Logged |
Faith
Knowflake Posts: 6947
From:
Registered: Jul 2011
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posted February 24, 2014 06:53 PM
Very cool. IP: Logged |
Pearlty
Moderator Posts: 392
From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012
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posted February 25, 2014 11:26 AM
 "through sheer grit determination
or through the ignorant blindness to ones self preservation hunched stricken but excitedly open armed with anxious trepidation" Loved this in its entirety, and this^^ is one powerfully moving statement.
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mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 2437
From: us
Registered: May 2012
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posted February 25, 2014 09:20 PM
Wow! I really LIKE the way you write...  IP: Logged |
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