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From: Love Street, she lingers long on Love Street..
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posted May 07, 2014 11:46 PM            

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Alluring starry eyes
hosting playwrights and mill workers
gathered in fire light
under the cover of darkness

Scene One: You walk in.
She tells me, "Lust is one of the seven deadlies"
with those glittering eyes.

Rain dances in her smile
and sparks ignite when she blinks

"FREE me, or be me!" The White Mare groaned
under the weight of tulle and lace
and offerings of many fine things.
"It shall be one helluva wedding," he/I said

And then I will be with you in the quiet darkness, like you asked
and rejoice in the dawn, when you come undone
"UNDONE?" she creaked.

Thunder spoke his name loudly
and lit the path
through the gardens
"Come- get wet in the storm,
you're not really formed
until the seasons have had their way with you."

I take her tiny hand and leap into Spring.
I will love her, in a meaningful dream
And she will be me, by tomorrow.

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From: Venus next to Randall
Registered: Apr 2009

posted May 08, 2014 04:13 AM            

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I loooove this!

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Remember, love can conquer the influences of the planets....It can even eliminate karma.

Linda Goodman

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posted May 08, 2014 08:13 AM            

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Beautiful..

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posted May 08, 2014 06:09 PM            

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It's powerful imagery, beautiful.

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Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams.

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From: Love Street, she lingers long on Love Street..
Registered: May 2009

posted May 09, 2014 02:49 AM            

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Thanks so much. I think it's weird. lol.
I wrote this after a dream I had where I was at a wedding and animals were talking to me.

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From: Venus next to Randall
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posted May 09, 2014 03:35 AM            

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Weird is wonderful..besides..

It makes sense.

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Linda Goodman

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posted May 09, 2014 10:02 AM            

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I didn't find it weird. It feels whimsically enchanted like dreams often are.

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posted May 12, 2014 02:17 PM            

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From: Love Street, she lingers long on Love Street..
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posted May 14, 2014 10:20 PM            

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Hurrah for weird weddings!

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From: sterling heights
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posted August 25, 2014 11:55 PM            

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My 12th house Venus/Pluto in Scorpio loves this! Very nice

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