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Topic: When your shadow passes
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Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 376 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted August 28, 2014 10:37 PM
When Your Shadow PassesIt's all gone It's all gone now You can relax, it won't intoxicate You anymore Brutal darkness Can you spare me? Can you spare me some shadow to hide in? They say only darkness hides But sometimes people only think They can hide I wish it was December already Time flies there, they say, It is magnificent Or will it be? I tend to wonder And thoughts are crawling all over The place, like flies when distracted If it was May I would be gone And far away from my old edgy self It's time to stay Don't be ignorant Enjoy the scenery while it lasts It will only last longer The more you care So don't fake your empathy With ruthless pieces of shallow pearls You didn't even drown for IP: Logged |
rajji Knowflake Posts: 1807 From: Registered: Jan 2011
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posted August 28, 2014 11:54 PM
Pearls of wisdom!IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 376 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted August 29, 2014 12:08 AM
Thank you rajji IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 717 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted August 29, 2014 07:36 AM
excellent poem. IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 376 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted August 29, 2014 09:19 PM
Thanks PearltyIP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 2869 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted August 30, 2014 03:47 PM
Wow, Ayelet! I really like this ~~ awesome! IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 376 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted August 31, 2014 05:06 AM
Thank you Mirage! IP: Logged |