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posted October 03, 2014 09:37 AM            

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I was away in privation
with my love
tepid, heavy, tumultuous
the rest you need not know
aside from, he's lavender, scarlet,
and abreast with gold.

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posted October 04, 2014 05:25 AM            

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That is a pearl. I liked the seeming contradiction between 'tepid' and 'tumulous', and that even in privation there was passion, and the lover had a heart of gold, or so it seemed to me.

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posted October 04, 2014 07:28 PM            

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posted October 05, 2014 04:08 PM            

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Thank you Ayelet..life seems to contradict itself sometimes...But in love those contrasts can be beautiful.

and a big to you mirage!

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posted October 05, 2014 04:51 PM            

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Tremulous.

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posted October 06, 2014 12:11 PM            

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Awesome!

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posted October 08, 2014 09:41 AM            

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Thanks

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posted October 08, 2014 09:41 AM            

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posted October 08, 2014 04:04 PM            

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^ dp... You're just being doubly-thankful ....as I am too!

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posted October 09, 2014 10:13 AM            

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