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Topic: Me in you..
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thequeen Knowflake Posts: 835 From: Antwerp, Belgium Registered: Sep 2014
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posted November 16, 2014 08:21 AM
They tell I'll find you, when i'm in me, When i'll introspect, and cease to look for thee, What they don't tell me, is how i will smile, If it isn't for you, i'd never tread another mile, I see you in mountain, i see you in stars, They say, you're a myth, but i see you each hour, If you're not real, how my eyes see you, How i always sense, the beauty in you, I try to rationalise, that you're not real, Then i'm convinced, that life is surreal, For my heart is burning, in passions so wild, My heart's for you, my love is so mild, Hope what they say, one day turns to lie, I want to be yours, our paths loved and wry...IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 519 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted November 17, 2014 04:31 PM
Lovely. If i understood correctly, an intimate relationship with the divine.IP: Logged |
thequeen Knowflake Posts: 835 From: Antwerp, Belgium Registered: Sep 2014
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posted November 17, 2014 04:54 PM
No I'm in search for a soulmate. All my fellow tarot readers here tell me that I need to introspect so about that Thanks IP: Logged |
thequeen Knowflake Posts: 835 From: Antwerp, Belgium Registered: Sep 2014
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posted November 17, 2014 04:55 PM
For an unseen love IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 3064 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted November 18, 2014 03:43 AM
An "Other" .... I fervently hope you'll find your soulmate, TheQueen!One Us, In Each Other Love it! IP: Logged |
thequeen Knowflake Posts: 835 From: Antwerp, Belgium Registered: Sep 2014
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posted November 18, 2014 08:49 AM
Thanks Mirage,Another one for you all.. The empty pages under my pen, They glitter, Yes, they glitter, The pages, so empty, There are emotions I could pour on it, There are emotions I would pour on it, There are words I could speak, There are words I would speak, Me in you, from me to you, Walking on streets, walking close to you, Let me sing, a song broken in harmony, Sing to me, a song with no symphony, I could write you a letter, If i could, I would write you a letter, When I see this love, I'm filled, When I see this verse, yes I'm instilled, With aura of protection, in your love I feel, Some images I manifest, some images not real, If I could, i would walk with you, I would never hold back, If only, If only I knew, who were you... IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 3064 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted November 18, 2014 07:19 PM
"Sense"-extension "BeHolding"-spaces Love your words IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 810 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted November 20, 2014 09:53 AM
Both poems - Beautiful well springs from the heart. IP: Logged |
thequeen Knowflake Posts: 835 From: Antwerp, Belgium Registered: Sep 2014
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posted November 21, 2014 02:28 AM
Thanks Pearlty IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 810 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted November 25, 2014 01:01 PM
You're welcome queen.. Your interpretation of your poem referring to a soulmate made me think of a former couple in my neighborhood. One of only a few soulmate couples I've had the pleasure to know. They were lovely to observe and learn from. They ended up together 65 years or so, she passed on first, and I watched her husband mope around the yard for 6 months..I spoke to him when it was almost his time to go- I've never met a man so eager to pass on, but I imagine he missed her endlessly. The beautiful love they procured during their lives - there isn't even words for. Touched me deeply though- just knowing them. I wish for you, the magical fulfillment of finding yours. It's brave to desire that..not because it's twinkly, romantic, or light- but rather it's a profound learning experience between two. IP: Logged |
thequeen Knowflake Posts: 835 From: Antwerp, Belgium Registered: Sep 2014
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posted November 25, 2014 10:01 PM
Speechless about their story, a love so stirring, poignant, yet liberating… Thank You..IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 810 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted November 26, 2014 11:27 AM
Yes -Liberating.. IP: Logged | |