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posted November 24, 2014 02:45 AM            

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If I hurt you,
I never meant to do it,
I never meant to say,
What I never said,
The cross in my heart,
And these tears of pain,
I will lift you up,
If only you let it rain,
Your twinkling smile,
Is so gentle so sweet,
In the heat of the moment,
The passion you meet,
So smile and smile back,
Let me be for you,
If you shed these tears of pain,
For you,
I'll make it rain again..

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posted November 24, 2014 10:40 AM            

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Sweet.

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posted November 25, 2014 12:35 PM            

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Sympathetically beautiful sentiments.

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posted November 26, 2014 06:47 AM            

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Beautiful, thank you for sharing with us.

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posted November 27, 2014 11:04 AM            

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Maybe sweet is not enough of a word to describe it, but this is the taste with which the poem left me in the end. The cross and the tears are definitely bitter and salty... But sweet is what's left with me.

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posted November 27, 2014 10:16 PM            

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Originally posted by Pearlty:
Sympathetically beautiful sentiments.

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Thanks Pearlty..
I will dance in the rain, if, you shed these tears of pain..

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posted November 27, 2014 10:19 PM            

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Originally posted by Swift Freeze:
Beautiful, thank you for sharing with us.

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Thanks Swift Freeze, goes without saying,
I saw you move leisurely as glacier, above the see,
What I beheld was, but a projection, of what belonged to thee..

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I know you, for now, and I'll know you, for ever…

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posted November 27, 2014 10:24 PM            

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Originally posted by Ayelet:
Maybe sweet is not enough of a word to describe it, but this is the taste with which the poem left me in the end. The cross and the tears are definitely bitter and salty... But sweet is what's left with me.

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Thanks Ayelet...Imbibe in me your true colours of joy,
Bitter or Salty, it's worth the tears to destroy..

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posted December 01, 2014 05:36 PM            

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Smiling... wonderful.

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posted December 02, 2014 06:53 PM            

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This poem puts me at literal ease; it is a very sweet sentiment.

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posted December 03, 2014 09:03 AM            

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Mirage , IcedAce

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Thank you both, for appreciating it

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posted December 05, 2014 12:11 PM            

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posted March 03, 2015 12:17 PM            

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Good stuff.

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posted March 03, 2015 04:43 PM            

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TQ~~ ...

(music) I Wish It Would Rain (The Temptations) [2:48] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z-es4Q8AJaU

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posted March 10, 2015 09:25 AM            

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Been there.

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