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Topic: The Hellish House of the Dead Moon, Hadopelagis
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Sailor Gemini Knowflake Posts: 691 From: Magellan Castle, Venus Registered: Mar 2013
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posted November 26, 2014 12:34 AM
I have absolutely no idea where I was going with this, but I am very... bitter at the moment. Yes. Bitter. I'm... "bitter". *maniac laugh* seriously though, I'm mad, I wrote about it, this is what I got. Enjoy, and I could use a little commentary. Now, without further adieu,Sailor Gemini's The Hellish House of the Dead Moon, Hadopelagis In a tainted and veiled dwelling down under lies three treasures Guarding it are two demons, both of which had created a story of sin; Four are unknown, but here lie: Paresse, Avaricia, Neid, Jajonsim, and Gluttony; The eldest tends the Evil Heart The greedy is a recluse The jealous one covets the stage The noble one was shunned And the eater is clueless Resound into the Nothingness, the House of Hell To appease the Empress of Damnation is but one simple task; Simply abandon your Self, and you will be well To refuse the infamous decree is to choose Death; The Sinners don’t doubt that Together, they wait for the birth of Luxuria and Ira How much longer must Time pass? Resign to the Father Sky, family of Malevolence Once all have risen, the Demon King will rise Find them, find them, await their Birth; But the High Priestess keeps her fears The final two have yet to reveal themselves Return to the Mother Earth, dreaded clan of Sorrows; And be purged of you Sins ... .... And the ones with the leading parts are... ------------------ I call the planets by their Greek names. Now please stop asking which asteroids I'm using? ^-^' -La Sorcière du Temps IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 812 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted November 26, 2014 11:26 AM
Sorry you're feeling bitter... Is the underlying theme on this about betrayal in a larger context? I read it over twice and that's the sense I felt in your thoughts and wording. IP: Logged |
Sailor Gemini Knowflake Posts: 691 From: Magellan Castle, Venus Registered: Mar 2013
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posted November 26, 2014 01:53 PM
Unfortunately, yes, but it doesn't end there. I don't even want to get started on it right now, but thanks Pearlty------------------ I call the planets by their Greek names. Now please stop asking which asteroids I'm using? ^-^' -La Sorcière du Temps IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 527 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted November 26, 2014 09:37 PM
Quite a story. Need to read it again. Interesting and discordant, even though harmonious in the way with which it is dealt. I didn't understand who were the four, as you have written about five. IP: Logged |
Sailor Gemini Knowflake Posts: 691 From: Magellan Castle, Venus Registered: Mar 2013
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posted November 27, 2014 01:21 AM
There are two sins left, the other two are the demons that summoned/created/did whatever to them. The five are the sins that are awake.IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 3068 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted November 27, 2014 03:04 AM
Powerful! IP: Logged | |