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Sailor Gemini
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posted November 26, 2014 12:34 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Sailor Gemini     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I have absolutely no idea where I was going with this, but I am very... bitter at the moment. Yes. Bitter. I'm... "bitter".
*maniac laugh* seriously though, I'm mad, I wrote about it, this is what I got. Enjoy, and I could use a little commentary. Now, without further adieu,

Sailor Gemini's
The Hellish House of the Dead Moon, Hadopelagis

In a tainted and veiled dwelling down under lies three treasures
Guarding it are two demons, both of which had created a story of sin;
Four are unknown, but here lie:
Paresse, Avaricia, Neid, Jajonsim, and Gluttony;
The eldest tends the Evil Heart
The greedy is a recluse
The jealous one covets the stage
The noble one was shunned
And the eater is clueless
Resound into the Nothingness, the House of Hell
To appease the Empress of Damnation is but one simple task;
Simply abandon your Self, and you will be well
To refuse the infamous decree is to choose Death;
The Sinners don’t doubt that
Together, they wait for the birth of Luxuria and Ira
How much longer must Time pass?
Resign to the Father Sky, family of Malevolence
Once all have risen, the Demon King will rise
Find them, find them, await their Birth;
But the High Priestess keeps her fears
The final two have yet to reveal themselves
Return to the Mother Earth, dreaded clan of Sorrows;
And be purged of you Sins
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And the ones with the leading parts are...

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I call the planets by their Greek names.
Now please stop asking which asteroids I'm using? ^-^'
-La Sorcière du Temps

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Pearlty
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posted November 26, 2014 11:26 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

Sorry you're feeling bitter...
Is the underlying theme on this about betrayal in a larger context? I read it over twice and that's the sense I felt in your thoughts and wording.

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Sailor Gemini
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posted November 26, 2014 01:53 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Sailor Gemini     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Unfortunately, yes, but it doesn't end there. I don't even want to get started on it right now, but thanks Pearlty

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I call the planets by their Greek names.
Now please stop asking which asteroids I'm using? ^-^'
-La Sorcière du Temps

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Ayelet
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posted November 26, 2014 09:37 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Quite a story. Need to read it again. Interesting and discordant, even though harmonious in the way with which it is dealt. I didn't understand who were the four, as you have written about five.

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Sailor Gemini
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posted November 27, 2014 01:21 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Sailor Gemini     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
There are two sins left, the other two are the demons that summoned/created/did whatever to them. The five are the sins that are awake.

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mirage29
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posted November 27, 2014 03:04 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Powerful!

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