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Topic: Play the missed
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thequeen
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From: Al Da Beatz
Registered: Sep 2014
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posted April 01, 2015 05:58 PM
  
Abide by, rule of broken wish,
Chunky a desire, a soaring bliss,
The bowers of ego, and innocence along,
A touch of chastity, demoralising yet strong,
A capability, to touch the chest,
And leave to God, the filthy rest,
Vogues of fantasy, grooves of word,
Doping the passions, exiling the bird,
A pious belonging, and agitating game,
A sensuous longing, yet so insane,
All these together, look so odd,
Apostate as looks with, holy nod,
Some combination just look so bizarre,
Bewildering the game, curtailing the power,
I try in recluse to solve all this,
My innermost desire, is to play the missed.IP: Logged |
Randall
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From: Saturn next to Charmaine
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 02, 2015 11:49 AM
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mirage29
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From: us
Registered: May 2012
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posted April 02, 2015 06:01 PM
Love it!...
I personally relate to your words, in this way--In the way of abiding in a relationship to the mystical divine, and yet wanting to incorporate the human one, with the sexual needs and tides that arise from time to time. Both pull with each their own type of strong longing... How can you do both, and remain clear with both sides of it, within the same state or layer of awareness and being conscious... Can both exist equally, and not create the "one missed"? Seems that one side can exert more of a pull than the other, which can mean in human terms the diverting of precious focus and attention towards one of these, more than the other. Both demand strong attention. In a way, there's a sense of depriving, which occurs? Like caught between two beloveds-- different, and the same. Which call? So much difficulty in having to decide between them?... If you lose the one, then it deprives that one? yet you desire both equally. My innermost desire, is to play the missed?...
Like someone is missing you? Or you just want to make yourself scarce? Or you're making a plan to pursue the missed-one in whatever position you find yourself? Constant flowing back and forth, like teeter totter... in slow thick motion. Oh Questions, questions, questions!  Good evocative work, (as usual), T.Q.!!  IP: Logged |
Randall
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From: Saturn next to Charmaine
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted April 03, 2015 04:10 PM
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Originally posted by mirage29:
Love it!...
I personally relate to your words, in this way--In the way of abiding in a relationship to the mystical divine, and yet wanting to incorporate the human one, with the sexual needs and tides that arise from time to time. Both pull with each their own type of strong longing... How can you do both, and remain clear with both sides of it, within the same state or layer of awareness and being conscious... Can both exist equally, and not create the "one missed"? Seems that one side can exert more of a pull than the other, which can mean in human terms the diverting of precious focus and attention towards one of these, more than the other. Both demand strong attention. In a way, there's a sense of depriving, which occurs? Like caught between two beloveds-- different, and the same. Which call? So much difficulty in having to decide between them?... If you lose the one, then it deprives that one? yet you desire both equally. My innermost desire, is to play the missed?...
Like someone is missing you? Or you just want to make yourself scarce? Or you're making a plan to pursue the missed-one in whatever position you find yourself? Constant flowing back and forth, like teeter totter... in slow thick motion. Oh Questions, questions, questions! Good evocative work, (as usual), T.Q.!!
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thequeen
Knowflake Posts: 1118
From: Al Da Beatz
Registered: Sep 2014
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posted April 04, 2015 07:41 PM
That's a wonderful description mirage…I think sometimes when you talk to someone for the very first time you feel like home..sometimes you don't understand certain things, somethings are destined to happen,… even though you know something is wrong, the craving remains very strong, that's how I felt for someone the very first time I talked. It wasn't an obsessed sort of feeling, it was more of, that love that completes your soul to the innermost chord.It wasn't amongst two different lovers, but one and the same. The pure love don't even need commitment to prove the love, it's too strong to walk through all boundaries. It's true, to desire the one, that doesn't confess their heart, the missed one. Love isn't wild, it's very tender and I believe that intimacy should be shared with only the one who completes your soul otherwise all else just hollows your soul and you feel empty after all the other attempts. There is only someone destined to fulfil your soul purpose, at least a part of it.
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mirage29
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From: us
Registered: May 2012
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posted April 06, 2015 12:39 AM
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Ayelet
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posted April 06, 2015 06:20 PM
Hi thequeen, your poem is interesting. I didn't understand to whom you address your words. I read what Mirage wrote, and what you replied. So there aren't two lovers? Only one? How so? And if someone misses you, then s/he is the second party, or the first, not so? Perhaps I misunderstood...IP: Logged |
mirage29
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posted April 06, 2015 06:57 PM
Hi Ayelet! {{ }} What I had been thinking about was the inner struggle and relationship to Self and one's Ideals, versus lust-temptations. The state of suspension we can find ourselves in when the 'choice' is there. So, in a way, are you saying that unless it were "spiritually perfect", you would let an opportunity to have a more earthen love pass you by? IP: Logged |
Pearlty
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From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012
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posted April 06, 2015 11:10 PM
Aloft with romance, torrid passion, and thinking upon those raw uninhibited ideals (embracing no boundaries other than our own) we feel toward another; is the sense I felt while reading this- Superbly engaging poem IP: Logged |
Ayelet
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posted April 06, 2015 11:31 PM
Hello Mirage...
I don't understand how you got to the conclusion that I only crave for perfect spiritual love. Though there is a grain of truth there, since I don't wish to compromise feeling and unity in these respects. Great reading, Pearly IP: Logged |
mirage29
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posted April 07, 2015 06:24 PM
Pearlty, wonderful!Ayelet ... I didn't mean to diminish what you said, as far as earthy love is concerned. I do Understand that earthy love does not exist as an opposite from Divine Love, but is 'a channel' for it. All Loves are based upon a 'creative' energy, yes? It's how we all got here, into a body!...via the sexual act. But to me, the most Beautiful love I can imagine, would be that each individual has an active relationship (your word 'craves' is a good one) with the Divine Consort (God, The Beloved). From there, the task is to seek to become equally-yoked with another person who is similar. Then finally to transfer and share that soup of palpable etheric spiritual force (Spirit of Love) back-and-forth between two people... Reminds me of the Cross of Matter-- up and down (heaven to earth, earth to heaven), and Across (from human person, to other human person). (((... uh, then!!, you can throw in some hot physical sex besides that! LMAO!!! omg  ))) nah, j/k, Sorry! I'm in a state of strangeness... a sad'ish joy'ish weirdness right now.... like a limbo-state, not knowing what my future holds, but knowing something ineffably-specific is out there, somewhere, for me. *sigh*  I feel a song (music) There's a Place For Us (Barbra Streisand) [4:58] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i28JDWFv9z0
T.Q. .... Your poem here is having Babies! ... Creativity multiplies
{I've been having an extra-wordiness transit! ... I would say 'many apologies'.... but then that's too many words too! LOL } IP: Logged |
thequeen
Knowflake Posts: 1118
From: Al Da Beatz
Registered: Sep 2014
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posted April 09, 2015 06:04 PM
Thanks for all the interpretations Pearlty, Ayelet and mirage..I think you guys toned the morbidity of my poem into something interesting.. I loved the interpretation, it can be one and the same lover in the sense as it's me and the other 'One'.. It's not someone who misses me, but I miss, or maybe someone who misses me too, but here I'm shedding light on my point of view.. Someone mixed with ego and innocence at the same time.. To delve in crimes leaving everything to God as he leads you on, sometimes maybe even forces you.. To fuel your passions an wander into nothingness, and feel no chains whatsoever…as long it feels good why not go with the flow because that's the call of your soul.. I would personally die alone if I don't get a spiritually perfect love, otherwise I feel an absolute vacuum inside me. When I feel someone nourishes my soul, I hang in as I listen more to someone's soul, when I can't I let go.. But if I'll settle for less it will be God's command and I'm obliged to follow Let it have babies, makes me introspect and create more.. you guys inspire me with these awesome interpretations.. IP: Logged | |
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