Posts: 1150
From: Al Da Beatz
Registered: Sep 2014

posted April 25, 2015 08:28 AM            

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The bridge of water, stood so tall,
Flowing in sky, each second to fall,
Lifting me high, was unseen force,
It pushed me aloft, its touch was coarse,
Looked down I saw, a scary gap,
And with a thrust, was broke my nap,
I envisioned a face, couldn’t figure out,
And mesmerised, it made me proud,
Stepped back two strides, but passage ceased,
I turned so confused, my agony pleased,
It filtered my soul, to drink my hope,
Someone tied up, my soul with rope,
A prison I carried, while moved around,
I endeavoured to soar, was pulled to ground,
A brutal force, held me so fast,
Turning my every, breath in its last,
Dreadful it was, this merciful cry,
I longed for screeching, in futile try,
As someone shut, my mouth from behind,
My heart was trapped, and soul was wind.

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From: us
Registered: May 2012

posted April 26, 2015 02:32 AM            

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Incredibly Beautiful, TQ! I died in your arms tonight. This has got to be my favorite from all your poems so far. Ahhhhh. Well done!

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From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012

posted April 26, 2015 10:10 AM            

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Absolutely gorgeous queen.

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From: Al Da Beatz
Registered: Sep 2014

posted April 27, 2015 12:20 PM            

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Thank you both for appreciating.

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Registered: Sep 2010

posted April 28, 2015 07:43 AM            

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Pictorial and breathtaking.

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