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From: Ohio
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posted May 29, 2015 09:46 AM            

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It's been easy to curb
wandering
while with the right person
lightly traversing

considerate and thoughtful
prively blanketed,
reciprocation- thankful to learn

his essence, placidly at home
among our blessed bonds of difference

much better than sabotaging
these beautiful acumens
we observe, applause, recurr

finding once again
the love
we sought to deserve.

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From: Al Da Beatz
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posted May 29, 2015 11:16 AM            

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Wonderful lines. We surely deserve love being child of God .. Exquisite ..

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posted May 30, 2015 08:59 AM            

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Thank you queen.

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posted June 01, 2015 04:17 AM            

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How awesome to have such a source of inspiration in your life which is so positive. Very pleasant. What is "prively"? I couldn't find the word...

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posted June 01, 2015 07:49 AM            

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Thanks for reading Ayelet! I meant privily- misspelling on my part.

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From: Bella's Hair Salon
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posted June 02, 2015 11:28 PM            

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Sounds like an ode to a good, sound marriage?

I'd love to know more about these lines?

"much better than sabotaging
these beautiful acumens
we observe, applause, recurr"

Does that mean you two usually agree?

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posted June 03, 2015 01:17 PM            

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Thanks for reading Faith,
"An ode to a good sound marriage?"
Kind of, but felt more like a blending together when I wrote it. The couple lines you singled out..had to do with cherishing differences, rather than thinking of them as a door way to conflict.

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From: Saturn next to Charmaine
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posted June 11, 2015 01:33 PM            

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Happy Birthday!

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posted June 11, 2015 03:22 PM            

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Thanks Randall!

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posted June 12, 2015 11:22 PM            

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{{ }} Have a Wonderful Birthday Weekend, too.

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posted June 13, 2015 12:17 PM            

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Thank you Mirage!!

and wishing you and all the other poetry peeps, a lovely weekend as well.

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posted June 14, 2015 04:19 PM            

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Originally posted by Pearlty:

Thank you Mirage!!

and wishing you and all the other poetry peeps, a lovely weekend as well.

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