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Topic: Mourning
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thequeen Knowflake Posts: 1372 From: India Registered: Sep 2014
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posted June 29, 2015 02:24 AM
Igniting my virtue, my soul you thrive, With ambience of mourning, we love and cry, Pulp of the essence, drafting the power, I miss your presence, each second, each hour, Enchanting my poignance, with love in eye, Compassion as your vice, loving wet and dry, You merge my vengeance, with shining dime, And gift me poison, with love each time, I miss your caress, since you touched and left, And lost my glory, in your arms of theft, This pressed me petite, dragging warm in well, In my heart you live, in soul you dwell, Going ways to destroy, your glimpse is divine, Holy gestures I envisage, in bulk of shrines, Your rapport of commanding, me to swim, My vulnerability of falling, and holding your skin, Your heart’s approval, scarce in claim, My wounds are kissed, with your love’s name, I love the pious, spoken and lying, Your love in a bottle, sealed and dying.IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 4065 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted June 29, 2015 06:52 PM
Passionate and Beautiful I realize that this poem was born of heartache and terrible pain, but sometimes when a soul has been utterly humbled and dives down that deep, the broken-vessel may also fill the sense space with the most costly pleasant perfume... turning words of pain into the Love Song between the Soul and Its God. Precious and Inspiring, {{T.Q.}}! IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1087 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted June 30, 2015 09:58 AM
heartfelt writing...IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1055 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted June 30, 2015 02:29 PM
It is interesting that through mourning, your love for him is dying. Very strong.IP: Logged |
thequeen Knowflake Posts: 1372 From: India Registered: Sep 2014
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posted July 01, 2015 08:46 AM
Thanks for making it realise that it's dying. I guess even I didn't realise it was sealed with its share and now fading off finally. Thank you very much for reading in exploration to all three Pearlty, mirage and Ayelet. IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 4065 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted July 01, 2015 04:23 PM
{hug}Ayelet~ Very keen observation. IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 56982 From: Saturn next to Charmaine Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 02, 2015 01:27 PM
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Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1087 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted September 03, 2015 12:14 PM
Bump, just checking in with you thequeen, haven't seen you around here lately. Hope things are well. IP: Logged |
thequeen Knowflake Posts: 1372 From: India Registered: Sep 2014
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posted September 12, 2015 09:16 AM
Thanks for checking up on me, I am in perfect shape. Was a little busy.IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 4065 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted September 13, 2015 06:00 AM
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