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thequeen
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posted June 29, 2015 02:24 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for thequeen     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Igniting my virtue, my soul you thrive,
With ambience of mourning, we love and cry,
Pulp of the essence, drafting the power,
I miss your presence, each second, each hour,
Enchanting my poignance, with love in eye,
Compassion as your vice, loving wet and dry,
You merge my vengeance, with shining dime,
And gift me poison, with love each time,
I miss your caress, since you touched and left,
And lost my glory, in your arms of theft,
This pressed me petite, dragging warm in well,
In my heart you live, in soul you dwell,
Going ways to destroy, your glimpse is divine,
Holy gestures I envisage, in bulk of shrines,
Your rapport of commanding, me to swim,
My vulnerability of falling, and holding your skin,
Your heart’s approval, scarce in claim,
My wounds are kissed, with your love’s name,
I love the pious, spoken and lying,
Your love in a bottle, sealed and dying.

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mirage29
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posted June 29, 2015 06:52 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Passionate and Beautiful

I realize that this poem was born of heartache and terrible pain, but sometimes when a soul has been utterly humbled and dives down that deep, the broken-vessel may also fill the sense space with the most costly pleasant perfume... turning words of pain into the Love Song between the Soul and Its God.

Precious and Inspiring, {{T.Q.}}!

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Pearlty
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posted June 30, 2015 09:58 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

heartfelt writing...

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Ayelet
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posted June 30, 2015 02:29 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
It is interesting that through mourning, your love for him is dying. Very strong.

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thequeen
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posted July 01, 2015 08:46 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for thequeen     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thanks for making it realise that it's dying. I guess even I didn't realise it was sealed with its share and now fading off finally.

Thank you very much for reading in exploration to all three Pearlty, mirage and Ayelet.

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mirage29
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posted July 01, 2015 04:23 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
{hug}

Ayelet~ Very keen observation.

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Randall
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posted July 02, 2015 01:27 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

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Pearlty
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posted September 03, 2015 12:14 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Bump, just checking in with you thequeen, haven't seen you around here lately. Hope things are well.

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thequeen
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posted September 12, 2015 09:16 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for thequeen     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thanks for checking up on me, I am in perfect shape. Was a little busy.

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mirage29
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posted September 13, 2015 06:00 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

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