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Ayelet
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posted September 18, 2015 12:13 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
A Secret Between Us

Is happiness all it seems?
Can you love without hiding
some of the most precious emotions away?
Or may they be the least precious of all,
but yours. I recognise
some of your features, they guide me
through the dark wave of still emotion,
trying to hide me unsuccessfully
under the wing of the great bird, the mother
of all of us helpless creatures,
surviving the flight of imagination
over the very real earth, hover above
secrets between us, lying to our faces
about separation and despair,
wanting us to pull the blanket
of sheer winter above our heads, escaping
senseless impressions
which are bound to drown us
one day
And then we are gone
inside the togetherness of all creatures,
helpless as they may seem.
The womb is echoing,
calling out one name
to make believe.

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mirage29
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posted September 18, 2015 02:41 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Wow!!!! {{{{ }}}} I feel you. So good with your words and images at describing the energy.

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Pearlty
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posted September 18, 2015 04:25 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

This certainly is one lovely poem to read through and resonate with Ayelet. Very nice!

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Ayelet
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posted September 18, 2015 11:32 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thanks Mirage and Pearlty! I guess this one is easier to resonate with

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thequeen
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posted September 19, 2015 01:08 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for thequeen     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Which name is the womb calling out. It was a very torrid but calm let out of human emotion. Beautiful.

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Ayelet
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posted September 20, 2015 05:08 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thank you thequeen

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LeeLoo2014
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posted September 20, 2015 05:25 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for LeeLoo2014     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Very nice!

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Ayelet
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posted September 20, 2015 06:13 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thanks LeeLoo, you once gave me a reading.. nice to see you here.

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LF DX
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posted September 20, 2015 09:34 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for LF DX     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
This is pretty good, it's very powerful.

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LeeLoo2014
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posted September 22, 2015 09:10 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for LeeLoo2014     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
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Originally posted by Ayelet:
Thanks LeeLoo, you once gave me a reading.. nice to see you here.

Awww thank you for the welcome!

I hope the reading was good and came true, or, if bad, that it didn't

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Ayelet
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posted September 22, 2015 04:19 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thank you LF DX!

You're welcome, LeeLoo! The reading was good, but I don't know yet if it would come true... I hope it will. Thanks for the effort, anyhow

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