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posted September 26, 2015 12:45 PM            

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Wooden Heart

Willow, will you talk to me
in my anxiety?
Would the wood come true into a tree?
Not alone, but a loner
seeking paradise in here
underneath the bush they fly,
flies and enormous butterflies,
charming dots upon their wings,
showing me the way to freedom
is within the little things.

Will you shed a tear, oh willow,
when the rain catches you
with your leaves on?
Would you knock upon my wooden heart,
making me answer with a prayer
like the one Pinnoccio uttered,
bead and one more bead on
a prayer string?
Tell me why, tell me how
you would love me when I am
alive again

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posted September 27, 2015 03:23 PM            

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posted September 28, 2015 11:47 AM            

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Learn lots. Don't judge. Laugh for no reason. Be nice. Seek Happiness. Follow your dreams.

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posted September 28, 2015 01:47 PM            

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It's very touching verse. Bravo again!

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posted September 28, 2015 05:29 PM            

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Thank you

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posted September 28, 2015 11:37 PM            

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Ah Little Willow... hold on tight. { }

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posted September 29, 2015 06:18 PM            

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Tender...

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posted September 29, 2015 07:54 PM            

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Thank you Pearlty

Mirage, I will!

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posted September 30, 2015 07:06 AM            

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It makes a wooden heart melt, your poem

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posted September 30, 2015 05:06 PM            

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Why thank you!

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posted September 30, 2015 09:36 PM            

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Originally posted by Ayelet:
Mirage, I will!

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posted October 02, 2015 03:26 PM            

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Originally posted by LeeLoo2014:
It makes a wooden heart melt, your poem

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posted October 03, 2015 02:54 PM            

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Great smilie!

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posted October 05, 2015 07:44 PM            

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^ You talking about the twirly-girl, Randall? She's so expressive... her movement and dance is 'exactly' the joy, exhilaration or delight I feel sometimes inside my belly and heart.

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