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From: India
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posted October 09, 2015 04:01 PM            

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Scared I was, entering an eave,
Of holy hermitage, and pious naïve,
To tumble down, from regal to rag,
And love your attire, and delicately drag,
Entwining a smile, gazing your chest,
Dilemma of ardor, intimate of best,
Your blissful nerve, beating in me,
In holy sophistication, of loving thee,
Beheld your soul, radiating to imbue,
In yellow placidity, frozen and skew,
Aught I do, to approve my breed,
To embed my love, as your only need,
Triumph in soul, my heart ignites,
Succeeding your notion, catching your might,
As prisoner of your love, you charm me so,
In chamber of liberty, noble and true,
Seeking you words, my love I conceal,
Mocking my dread, nothing I reveal,
Of being let down, my fear smiled,
Painting me white, and this love alive.

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posted October 09, 2015 04:35 PM            

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Soooo Beautiful!! TQ...

Whether you're talking about a mortal companion's devotion, or an ecstatic deep love of Heavenly Divine union, (or even BOTH at once)-- the effects of your words are amazing in me. {{ty}} {{ }}

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From: India
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posted October 09, 2015 04:58 PM            

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Thanks you mirage I'm glad it touches your bells.

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posted October 10, 2015 01:17 PM            

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It sings.

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posted October 11, 2015 06:49 AM            

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So beautiful

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posted October 11, 2015 06:51 AM            

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A real poet

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posted October 11, 2015 01:25 PM            

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Your fear paints this love alive.. you are a prisoner in the chamber of liberty... interesting thoughts in a piercing love poem.

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posted October 12, 2015 10:42 AM            

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Very Pretty!

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posted October 20, 2015 02:03 PM            

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Thanks all for liking

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