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Topic: Poem 1
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LF DX
Knowflake Posts: 122
From: Paraguay
Registered: Sep 2014
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posted November 11, 2015 10:56 PM
  
I'm trying new things, evolving, as a new feeling is growing, this is the first attempt of a poem, as it is a way to grow as a lyricist tooI watch you, and I’m fond of your life
As the scars of your soul cover your soft skin
your delicate skin, precious to me
As your mind, savage and gorgeous
Restless and calm
Full of penetrating words
That can tear me up to the core
And leave me without a choice
But to release the chains of my heart The fragrance of purple lilies you exude
Makes me yearn for love
As I’m sleeping in your lap
While I hear you singing
For the freedom of the dying mother
Who lost her dearest son in the fields
And her sickness has brought disgraces
Plagues and infamy
All that in a lovely evening nap Yet we have the time for laughter
For the galore of daydreams
And to question this paradise
Desecrated, mistreated and torn
And to put them into songs
Poems, unfinished fables
All while we look at each other
With our thoughts in synastry But still I do fear
That this moment, just a grain of sand
In the big clock of time
Vanishes
Without a warning, without a sign
And it perishes
And it withers
Turning into dust
Into an useless dream
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Ayelet
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Registered: Sep 2010
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posted November 12, 2015 05:40 AM
Epic and rich. There is a marked contrast between the importance of human's life and the ephemerality of it all.IP: Logged |
mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 4383
From: us
Registered: May 2012
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posted November 12, 2015 11:17 PM
Love it ... very richIP: Logged |
Randall
Webmaster Posts: 59103
From: Saturn next to Charmaine
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted November 13, 2015 12:30 PM
Loves it.IP: Logged |
Pearlty
Moderator Posts: 1164
From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012
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posted November 14, 2015 03:04 PM
I like your way of looking outward seeing many
situations-dimensions, bringing them together, and the balancing of thoughts that seem to take place in this.
 and.. Happy Birthday!! I wish for you a beautiful and creative year ahead.  
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mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 4383
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Registered: May 2012
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posted November 14, 2015 09:15 PM
((Thanks for reminding us, Pearlty!!!)) Happy Birthday, LF_DX!!!!  So glad you're a part of us here...
Wishing you Great Health and Success in the coming year!   .....  IP: Logged |
Ayelet
Knowflake Posts: 1170
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Registered: Sep 2010
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posted November 15, 2015 06:43 AM
Happy belated birthday LF DX! Happiness, creativity and love!!    IP: Logged |
Randall
Webmaster Posts: 59103
From: Saturn next to Charmaine
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted November 15, 2015 01:17 PM
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LF DX
Knowflake Posts: 122
From: Paraguay
Registered: Sep 2014
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posted November 15, 2015 07:36 PM
Thank you very much to all of you, and thank you for let me be a part of this space, you're all great poetic souls.
Cheers.
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