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posted November 23, 2015 07:32 AM            

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In this journey, I see mountain and stars,
It’s following me, since a distance far,
It twinkles in my shade, as night advance,
And gazes at me, seeking your chance,
The star radiates, aura of a kind,
Making you tend closer, leaving woes behind,
It’s cozy of star, to present your glance,
You float so above, with star in trance,
I perceive in star, you look at me,
Young and vibrant, serene and free,
And mountain as guardian, blows you high,
In star you float, going aloft in sky,
Some elements chase, hiding your face,
I turn perplexed, adjust for your glaze,
Love you reappear, giggle a smile,
Teasing my love, for a sporty while,
This fragrant straining, journey disposed,
In my bosom, your smile, your love composed,
My star I turn, you disappear,
Was it my fantasy, or were you there,
I do not know, but you are gone,
In my heart yet, you sit on throne.

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posted November 24, 2015 01:55 PM            

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Beautiful.

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posted November 24, 2015 03:20 PM            

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As dear Ayelet says... Beautiful! {{ }}

A Beautiful Pursuit of something Heavenly and Divine that is your sparkle AND your own Spark-- speaking of itself, witnessing its existance steadily-- Mainlined from the Sky to the actual beating Heart of WHO 'You' are...

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posted November 25, 2015 02:50 AM            

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Thank you both Ayelet and mirage for you invaluable responses. You description always seem to stir me up mirage.

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posted November 25, 2015 09:56 AM            

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Enchanting...

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posted November 25, 2015 03:40 PM            

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Originally posted by thequeen:
Thank you both Ayelet and mirage for you invaluable responses. You description always seem to stir me up mirage.

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I humbly very much thank you. You are most-Kind.

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