Lindaland
  For Yellow Wax And The Ants
  Building

Post New Topic  Post A Reply
profile | register | preferences | faq

UBBFriend: Email This Page to Someone! next newest topic | next oldest topic
Author Topic:   Building
Pearlty
Moderator

Posts: 1189
From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012

posted December 10, 2015 09:59 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Building

Poetry

* Just some highlights from life driven
events, I was thinking back on recently...


Building segues
from one to the next

Less impromptu is sequence
finding only substance
moving on through

This deafening roar of focus
accentuating details
from memory
familiar pasts
timing lapsed

Lovers, books, drafty sweaters
comfortable out of the way looks
gestures and kindness
null of expectation
only flight

The blue entities
who touched the earth
with a fondness to recall
and sweetly cry

All in good hopes
to bring the lifeless
back alive

To gather
once again
divine grace

White churches out of place
wafting through anointing oils
hearing melodious under breath hums
sounding like and feeling as if 'home'

Resurrecting spirit
where first douses of thunderous
healing light finally succumbed

Picking from the tree of plenty
humbling anomalies
reminiscent of peaceful long afternoons
laborous fruits
we never stray far from

Lulling through streets
shop windows empty
a seemingly distant
ambiguous dream
of awful vain lights dimming

Only a word or two scribbled
punctual, crumbled, and meant to be
Love displayed in her entirety.

IP: Logged

LF DX
Knowflake

Posts: 131
From: Paraguay
Registered: Sep 2014

posted December 10, 2015 12:19 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for LF DX     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Magnificent, I can't tell why, but I identify myself and what's happening in my life now with this poem with what it expresses.

IP: Logged

Pearlty
Moderator

Posts: 1189
From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012

posted December 11, 2015 08:44 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

Thank you..

IP: Logged

Ayelet
Knowflake

Posts: 1201
From:
Registered: Sep 2010

posted December 11, 2015 07:14 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Both abstract and personal, flighty with the blending of images, ars-poetic in the end.

IP: Logged

Pearlty
Moderator

Posts: 1189
From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012

posted December 12, 2015 10:59 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Ayelet:
Both abstract and personal, flighty with the blending of images, ars-poetic in the end.

Perfect description!

IP: Logged

thequeen
Knowflake

Posts: 2014
From: India
Registered: Sep 2014

posted December 12, 2015 01:23 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for thequeen     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Sounds like a nostalgic poem of the 70 with a new age girl's dream
Beautifully crafted

IP: Logged

Pearlty
Moderator

Posts: 1189
From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012

posted December 13, 2015 10:25 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

Ty!

IP: Logged

All times are Eastern Standard Time

next newest topic | next oldest topic

Administrative Options: Close Topic | Archive/Move | Delete Topic
Post New Topic  Post A Reply
Hop to:

Contact Us | Linda-Goodman.com

Copyright 2000-2015

Powered by Infopop www.infopop.com © 2000
Ultimate Bulletin Board 5.46a