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Topic: Blending Me In You
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thequeen Knowflake Posts: 2325 From: India Registered: Sep 2014
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posted December 19, 2015 01:33 PM
Hoping to hope it, In minutest ways, Trending mildly across, Distantly you gaze, As we drift I realise, You want to flee, From bondages of the world, To belong to me, But our love we ignore, The passion of heart, There are too many hurdles, To build us apart, What's real or true, What's our disdain, I look at you in agony, And hold me in pain, Ah, look my love, The moon too cries, The star is in distress, The night takes sighs, The holy our petition, God too rejects, Don't feel ignored, The world I'll deject, We are floating in sea, With night on head, We mourn my angel, Our love's not dead, It sparkles our soul, I can see you in night, The father we drift, The cord builds tight, I do not need to, Envision your trace, I can blindly skew, The silhouette of your face, I question myself. Ah, what is in you, The farther the float, Mesmerising the blues, I see in the sea, The moon reflects, Our love, Our purity, Our pining too melts, To belong to thee, Just belong to you, I float so distant, Yet blending me in you.IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 4852 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted December 19, 2015 10:07 PM
A world of quite-tight in-betweens... IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 61791 From: Saturn next to Charmaine Registered: Apr 2009
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posted December 20, 2015 05:03 PM
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LeeLoo2014 Knowflake Posts: 17431 From: Venus cornering Neptune Registered: Mar 2014
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posted December 21, 2015 03:43 AM
Nice ------------------ I seem to have loved you in numberless forms... LeeLoo's Esotericorner IP: Logged |
thequeen Knowflake Posts: 2325 From: India Registered: Sep 2014
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posted December 21, 2015 07:44 AM
Thank you for reading everyone IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1266 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted December 22, 2015 10:34 AM
Profoundly beautiful. IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1292 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted December 22, 2015 12:39 PM
Your poetry in general is etheral and filled with beauty, and so is this poem.IP: Logged | |