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Topic: Light of Hope
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LF DX Knowflake Posts: 139 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted December 21, 2015 01:01 PM
I can sense many souls breaking apart The burden of the world has bring them down You can feel it in the air Too many things boiling aroundSee the heat and the rain, the storms and floods Houses falling, and people crying There’re no good Samaritans to help them Only the cops to hit them hard And yet I see the light of hope In these forsaken souls Cause there’s no time to surrender When there’s a desire to make things better They’ll start again, brick by brick Cause there’s no safer place than home They seem ill but they ain’t weak Together they remain strong Food is scarce, and money is low Everything seems to be moving slow And no one to lay a helping hand They are completely on their own And yet I see the light of hope In these forsaken souls Cause there’s no time to surrender When there’s a desire to make things better So you got to remember Someone’s is living in the depths of hell While you complain with your computer In your bedroom alone Actions speak louder than words You can see it through their fight They may fall from exhaustion But they will fight to change their fate So you must see the light of hope In these forsaken souls So don’t dare to surrender Cause you have a choice to make things better IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 4540 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted December 21, 2015 05:20 PM
Wow... That's a very powerful message! I (myself) needed to hear that one today... thank you. Never give up. Don't give up. ... IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1201 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted December 22, 2015 10:29 AM
Very thoughful reminders... IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1212 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted December 22, 2015 12:55 PM
Strong words. An important message.IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1201 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted December 23, 2015 04:34 AM
quote: Originally posted by Pearlty:
Very thoughful reminders...
I meant to add earlier, however didn't have a chance to get back here-till now. I've noticed in most of your poems/lyrics a humanitarian quality, whether thinking on the less fortunate or those who might be suffering in any way. I applaud you for that LF DX, a very good attribute to have indeed. IP: Logged |
LF DX Knowflake Posts: 139 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted December 23, 2015 11:02 AM
Thank you Pearlty , yes, kinda, though I only express those qualities more in my words than my actions, cause I'm more of an introvert and it's hard to me to show those feelings to the community, but I always see the news, learn through my friends what's happening in my town, cause there's a lot of unrest in my country (Paraguay) right now, strikes, hunger, poverty, the neo-liberalist goverment (I'm kinda leftist, but not that much) is sinking this place through unnecessary debts, unnecessary expensive hotels, unnecessary spending in salaries and more.I always worry about what's happening in the world, but I'm more confortable writing it than being there with the people. Maybe because I'm a pessimist that deep inside thinks that it's all over for mankind, and all these marches are just a waste, but, at least I want to give something to the people, to make them believe, as I'm trying to change my pessmism through the experiences I have lived in this year, with the new people I've met, all poets, artists, musicians, more commited to social causes. Aqua Moon squaring Sun, Mars and Pluto in Scorpio. But also, I combine these emotions for my surroundings with the things I have in my personal life, that sentiment of "never give up" and understanding that other have worst things than me or you or all of us, it is also my feeling of trying to fight for the woman I'm in love with, a cancer woman that's a musician, a poet and a social activist. That at the moment we're in a rough time as we haven't talked in like 2 weeks already but we're gonna see each other soon to play music(We're in a band together) and we'll probably discuss a lot of things in that day In a sense I kinda absorb some of the qualities of the women I felt and I put them in my lyrics. IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1201 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted December 23, 2015 02:56 PM
Thanks for explantion above. Even if introversion keeps you from action, it's good that you are aware of causes... writing about it is a form of doing something, helpful actually. Words are powerful and set things in motion, sometimes more than one realizes. I tend to be on a local helpful level around here, I rarely watch the news. I find there are people right in my vicinity that need a hand, an ear, a kind word ,or support. I often give until I find myself looking for a soft place to land to rekindle my own energy. I enjoy it however, and couldn't imagine living another way. Well I hope you and your love interest find a cozy happy medium for each other. Where it is equal and you won't feel like having to fight for love. All good things grow slow- while nurturing ..takes patience.
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