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posted December 22, 2015 04:22 PM            

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That Day

I've seen that day
when I was night
All gloomy and dark
I've seen a light
And it came forth,
took me by hand,
and talked to me thus:
"There is no end".
Though I was still night,
gloomy and cold,
grace shook my heart
and let me go.
Something remained
when I was gone:
Pure sight
and bliss unknown

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posted December 22, 2015 10:21 PM            

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How excellent, Ayelet!

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posted December 23, 2015 02:08 AM            

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Is this in context of love. It seems so, the piece is very naive and thoughtfully written ... Brilliant ..

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posted December 23, 2015 04:44 AM            

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Exquisitely timeless feeling.

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posted December 23, 2015 09:10 AM            

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Thank you for your readings

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posted December 23, 2015 11:25 AM            

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This is wonderful, strong words indeed.

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posted December 24, 2015 11:00 AM            

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Thank you for reading, LF DX.

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posted December 24, 2015 01:44 PM            

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is That Day, That Fateful Rue-filled Day...
But then, we shall see the Light...
Whether in a body, or not in a body..
All is Light ~ no Time, just what-is,
for what it could have been.

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