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Topic: Miscommunication
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LF DX Knowflake Posts: 140 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted December 24, 2015 01:07 AM
Have you looked yourself in the mirror? You have lost your precious smile I watch you and it’s getting clearer You have lost it already for a whileAnd you don’t even try to tell What’s the cause of this? And you don’t even try anymore It went from bad to worse I can’t help it, but to think what’s going on What happened to the us we were We live now in the days of Miscommunication As we look at each other, with a defiant stare “You seem lost in your debts and works” Those are the words I heard you say “You’re lost in your selfish ways” “And forgot about what made the spark” “And you do nothing but stay quiet” On what caused this mess And I can’t wait for you to change it This feeling of lovelessness I can’t help it, but to think what’s going on What happened to the us we were We live now in the days of Miscommunication And we can’t escape from this nightmare I pawned my soul for this home While you were living the dream You were the freebird while I followed the stream All it seems it’s a waste of time And you had your binge drinking With your endless risky bets What else can I say my darling I can’t cover your shallow needs I can’t help it, but to think what’s going on What happened to the us we were We live now in the days of Miscommunication And it seem this can’t be repaired “What have you fought for my dear” you said You once had fought for freedom A soldier of truth and wisdom you were Now you are a puppet of capitalist martyrdom And you had since left me stranded On my own for the causes And I can’t no more be satisfied When my happiness is falling into pieces I can’t help it, but to think what’s going on What happened to the love we had shared We surrendered to the days of Miscommunication And our ending seems so unfair Is it so hard, to remember the past we had Where we didn’t need words to communicate Now our deepest concerns are well hid As we’re torn apart by the twists of fate How easily we surrendered To the boredom and the unrest To the silence and the guilt trips And the distance that’s growing fast And we are both equally tired On what to do with this This bond seems it has expired If feels like we’re going to call it quits I can’t help it, but to think what’s going on What happened to the love we had shared We surrendered to the days of Miscommunication And it saddens me we had stopped to care IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1215 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted December 24, 2015 04:59 PM
Sad. Very open and candid. Even though it relates to a personal experience, I can feel it is also about a more universal concern. Did you show it to her?IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 4549 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted December 24, 2015 05:59 PM
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LF DX Knowflake Posts: 140 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted December 24, 2015 06:33 PM
Not really, I haven't talked to the cancer woman for 14 days already, albeit some of it it's about her, it's more about me and my constant self-doubt about many things in my life. When I wrote this I was in a very angry and irritable mood, and I guess I combined all of my frustrations in this lyric. Most of it it's fictional, but the frustration that is within the lyrics it's real.What happened between us is that we both just drifted apart, and it seems for now that everything is blocked between us, and we haven't tried to at least to say hi to each other in a while, and it's very frustrating. Myself for fear, she, I don't know it. We started to get more and more closer as our rehearsals ended, we shared a lot of things, we enjoyed to be with each other, she stayed in my place till the night (no sex, just talking and having fun), I haven't had this kind of connection with a woman in my life before, it was great, until we had our first date, and in a moment we could have kissed I simply got an anxiety attack, which left me pretty nervous, and I made her feel very unconfortable and left the place we were, since then things went downhill, and a mutual friend told me recently that she's been hanging out with someone, not sure yet if it's dating or just hanged around, but that was the kaboom, and after we spend together in a friend's event, where we spent together almost all night long but it felt like we had a big wall separating us, our conversations slowly became more colder and colder, then suddenly we stopped talking, not even for things of our band. Most of the recent poems are about her, and the powerful feeling I have for her, so powerful that I can't control the madness inside of me, the fears, the insecurities, the sentiment of fatalism, that she's drifting, etc, etc, but, I'm very responsable for it as well, for staying quiet during all this time and not even trying to text on how she's been. And we have to make a rehearsal this saturday, I haven't seen her or talked to her for a long time, let's see where it goes, but believe me, this is painful. IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 60416 From: Saturn next to Charmaine Registered: Apr 2009
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posted December 25, 2015 09:01 AM
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