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Topic: My soaring Dove
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thequeen Knowflake Posts: 2249 From: India Registered: Sep 2014
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posted January 02, 2016 12:39 PM
Enchanting my purity, In a fragrant breeze, Walking so tenderly, Tediously I cease, On seeing a frame, Of Holy God, I bow on floor, with hands joined to applaud, I Love your face, It pierces my soul, Your mesmerising presence, In ignited parol, I see your silhoutte, Burning to ash, And pulling me close, In ways so rash, Gentleness deceased, Mercy of life, I held your hands, Ignoring the strife, The are innumerable games, You ought to play, I love your presence, In night and day, I seek your command, To approve your need, I tend to run, To brew your breed, But you hold me close, In holy lanes, And pull the curtain, Of Window panes, There are stories to write, In our mildest love, I invoke you my angel, My soaring Dove...
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Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1238 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted January 02, 2016 02:05 PM
The love of God and man.. reverent and most beautiful poem thequeen. IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1264 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted January 04, 2016 07:35 PM
So passionate... both tender and wild. A romantic prayer IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 4693 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted January 04, 2016 10:29 PM
That's True Love, T.Q... Namaste. IP: Logged |
thequeen Knowflake Posts: 2249 From: India Registered: Sep 2014
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posted January 10, 2016 05:02 PM
Thanks for reading IP: Logged |
Faith Knowflake Posts: 15059 From: Bella's Hair Salon Registered: Jul 2011
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posted January 10, 2016 05:04 PM
Lovely, but I don't entirely understand, and I want to....is this a romantic or spiritual poem, may I ask? IP: Logged |
thequeen Knowflake Posts: 2249 From: India Registered: Sep 2014
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posted January 11, 2016 03:28 AM
This is a Spiritually Romantic prayer. Kind of one that awakens your innermost senses. Romance between man and divine.IP: Logged |
Faith Knowflake Posts: 15059 From: Bella's Hair Salon Registered: Jul 2011
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posted January 11, 2016 03:22 PM
I was hoping so. Can you tell me more about the line, "I tend to run, To brew your breed" ? IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 4693 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted January 11, 2016 08:06 PM
quote: Originally posted by thequeen: This is a Spiritually Romantic prayer. Kind of one that awakens your innermost senses. Romance between man and divine.
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thequeen Knowflake Posts: 2249 From: India Registered: Sep 2014
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posted January 12, 2016 04:56 PM
quote: Originally posted by Faith: I was hoping so. Can you tell me more about the line, "I tend to run, To brew your breed" ?
You can say, like a human has kids, similarly it means to bear the children of God. A woman runs and breeds the child of divine. She runs out of ecstasy that she is pregnant with the lords child. Like in our ancient scriptures, IP: Logged |
Faith Knowflake Posts: 15059 From: Bella's Hair Salon Registered: Jul 2011
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posted January 12, 2016 07:06 PM
Ohhhhh I get it now. Thanks for explaining.IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 4693 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted January 12, 2016 08:53 PM
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