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Topic: Gods guilty pleasure(warning, graphic nature)
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whitewitch111
Knowflake Posts: 3107
From: Hillsboro, OR, USA
Registered: Jan 2013
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posted January 19, 2016 07:46 PM
  
I wrote it to Christian woman by Type O Negative.
I'm also not prejudice, but I have dealt with a lot from Christians/Catholics and a recent episode with someone was just the icing on the cake. So if you don't want to read then don't.
Gods Pleasure
In hell I do reside,
God visits rarely to hide
From the world outside,
I see no liberation in his eyes,
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How should I serve Corpus Christi?
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Who pays for the sins of God?
The Vestal Virgin of Babylon IP: Logged |
Pearlty
Moderator Posts: 1243
From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012
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posted January 20, 2016 09:32 AM
Hi Whitewitch111,We have youngsters here at LL. I was asked to edit your content. IP: Logged |
whitewitch111
Knowflake Posts: 3107
From: Hillsboro, OR, USA
Registered: Jan 2013
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posted January 20, 2016 11:35 AM
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Originally posted by Pearlty:
Hi Whitewitch111,We have youngsters here at LL. I was asked to edit your content.
All right, I'm sorry then.
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Pearlty
Moderator Posts: 1243
From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012
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posted January 20, 2016 02:02 PM
It's okay- it happens Whitewitch. Glad to see you're posting your other stories and poems here again! It's good to turn that creativity loose, appears you have been working steady at it.
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whitewitch111
Knowflake Posts: 3107
From: Hillsboro, OR, USA
Registered: Jan 2013
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posted January 20, 2016 02:39 PM
I've been going through a lot, I will keep that in mind next time  Thank you by the way. Would you mind checking out my novel post and seeing what you think? I want to get it published so I'm very open to constructive criticism IP: Logged |
Pearlty
Moderator Posts: 1243
From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012
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posted January 20, 2016 02:57 PM
I wouldn't mind at all checking out your novel. I'll sit down with a cup of tea later, and read up on what you have so far.  IP: Logged |
mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 4760
From: us
Registered: May 2012
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posted January 20, 2016 03:52 PM
Everyone has to work on their own Beliefs religion, until they get the Breakthough experience.There are a lot of people out there with a burning need to make God their ***** . You just have to work out what YOU 'really' feel and think there. Giant Cosmic Mirror, lots of distracting. Some day maybe you'll have a Real and direct encounter. Until then, you'll be hammering out every piece of ~whatever you were fed about it. To learn who God really is, is easy, yet the Fight on the way there can take some into horrible states of degradation. Self-degradation. You are given over to every single self-consuming lie, or Truth. When you begin to see sense and essentially identify with the True Beauty of YOU, then you will know Peace. Practice the Peace you find. Let it Lift you. Looking forward to reading your novel.  IP: Logged |
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