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Topic: The Rose's bittersweet(Attempting at portraying Iamic Pentamiter
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whitewitch111
Knowflake Posts: 3240
From: Hillsboro, OR, USA
Registered: Jan 2013
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posted March 08, 2016 05:21 AM
  
....................,.,.............................Posses me!
...................................He Posses me;
......Like a rose in heat,
The Bumblebees sting I cannot soothe:
..In its deep crevice the burn,
............................Cut my stem with Scissors! ......................Picking is too slow and painful!
................ The bee pollinates me,
He is the last living link
From the old world,
And to cast him away is to forget me,
........ But yet for all his pain,
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whitewitch111
Knowflake Posts: 3240
From: Hillsboro, OR, USA
Registered: Jan 2013
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posted March 08, 2016 05:22 AM
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=xBq_PSg3vHc
Written to this song
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Pearlty
Moderator Posts: 1298
From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012
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posted March 10, 2016 09:55 AM
Love poems, which stem from songs. 
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Ayelet
Knowflake Posts: 1321
From:
Registered: Sep 2010
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posted March 11, 2016 01:08 PM
You really identify with the rose. Very passionate writing.IP: Logged |
mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 5056
From: us
Registered: May 2012
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posted March 12, 2016 02:45 PM
...........Lovely, and picturesque  IP: Logged |
Randall
Webmaster Posts: 63140
From: Saturn next to Charmaine
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 12, 2016 05:03 PM
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whitewitch111
Knowflake Posts: 3240
From: Hillsboro, OR, USA
Registered: Jan 2013
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posted March 13, 2016 11:44 AM
Thank you all!  IP: Logged |
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