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Topic: Poem 4
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LF DX
Knowflake Posts: 217
From: Paraguay
Registered: Sep 2014
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posted March 10, 2016 09:41 AM
  
Some good things have been happening since the blues festival, this poem says a bit of itI'll pass the tempest
The temptations, the fame burst
The trials for a better life
I'll break my haunted curse
My fears to heal all the scars
Of the ties to my past Don't mistrust me
I'm not going away any time soon
I'm here to stay
Through the better days
Where all fights have been won
On the pathways of our lives Your eyes are so wonderful
And your soul is so cheerful
As you tenderly smile
I keep that memory
It's my only remedy
Through the lonesome miles Well the leaves are fallin'
The weather is slowly changin'
Let's keep it warm while it lasts
With freedom, with passion
With energy, With joy
With tenderness, with love IP: Logged |
Pearlty
Moderator Posts: 1298
From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012
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posted March 11, 2016 08:35 AM
Can definitely feel the break through and unblocking-of thoughts in this, glad things seem to be going better and more clear for you LF.  IP: Logged |
Ayelet
Knowflake Posts: 1321
From:
Registered: Sep 2010
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posted March 12, 2016 12:16 PM
There is some kind of serenity in this poem, LF DX. Something peaceful and cozy, even though the wanderer is still present...  IP: Logged |
mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 5056
From: us
Registered: May 2012
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posted March 12, 2016 02:43 PM
There's something just ~sexy and honorable about a man with a deeply committed devotional soul like yours. Thanks for expressing your Heart, AND your Art!  IP: Logged |
Lindaland
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