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LF DX
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From: Paraguay
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posted April 08, 2016 04:32 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for LF DX     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
And if you heard it in the news
You know it is true
Yes I’m a loner
And a drifter too
But if you want to come with me
Let’s go where the asters want us to be

And if I don’t say a thing
You know it’s all wrong
That I escape from love
And I hide from a kinder life
But if you want come with me
Let’s go where the asters want us to be

In the theaters, in the stages of the world
Staying meek in the plains, or going wild
Where the lovers can be free

And if I’m away for a while
You can tell me it’s vile
That I make you feel restless
And my silence makes you helpless
But if you want to come with me
Let’s go where the asters want us to be

In the corner of fine arts
Painting the sky and the stars
Where our souls will roam endlessly

And if you feel lonely
Just tell it right to me
I’m hold you tenderly
Till the end of time
So if you want to come with me
Let’s go where the asters want us to be

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Pearlty
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posted April 09, 2016 09:08 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

A free spirit kind of feeling. Really enjoyed this LF.

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Ayelet
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posted April 09, 2016 11:31 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
That's a beautiful poem, LF DX. I love the way you offer love that overcomes the difficulties of temper...

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mirage29
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posted April 10, 2016 11:24 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

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Faith
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posted April 10, 2016 04:35 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Faith     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
So lovely....

What are the asters about?

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LF DX
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From: Paraguay
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posted April 10, 2016 10:50 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for LF DX     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Stars, Bad translation, In spanish, another way to say Stars is "astros", and I thought asters was its way to say it, so I got it wrong on that

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mirage29
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posted April 11, 2016 03:42 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I knew what you meant, LFDX!!!... I Got It!

Using the word asters added an Olde World charm to it... So 'Ancient' and like past-life drift to it.

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