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Topic: Come with me
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LF DX Knowflake Posts: 235 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted April 08, 2016 04:32 PM
And if you heard it in the news You know it is true Yes I’m a loner And a drifter too But if you want to come with me Let’s go where the asters want us to beAnd if I don’t say a thing You know it’s all wrong That I escape from love And I hide from a kinder life But if you want come with me Let’s go where the asters want us to be In the theaters, in the stages of the world Staying meek in the plains, or going wild Where the lovers can be free And if I’m away for a while You can tell me it’s vile That I make you feel restless And my silence makes you helpless But if you want to come with me Let’s go where the asters want us to be In the corner of fine arts Painting the sky and the stars Where our souls will roam endlessly And if you feel lonely Just tell it right to me I’m hold you tenderly Till the end of time So if you want to come with me Let’s go where the asters want us to be IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1319 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted April 09, 2016 09:08 AM
A free spirit kind of feeling. Really enjoyed this LF.IP: Logged |
Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 1386 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted April 09, 2016 11:31 PM
That's a beautiful poem, LF DX. I love the way you offer love that overcomes the difficulties of temper... IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 5215 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted April 10, 2016 11:24 AM
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Faith Knowflake Posts: 16815 From: Bella's Hair Salon Registered: Jul 2011
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posted April 10, 2016 04:35 PM
So lovely....What are the asters about? IP: Logged |
LF DX Knowflake Posts: 235 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted April 10, 2016 10:50 PM
Stars, Bad translation, In spanish, another way to say Stars is "astros", and I thought asters was its way to say it, so I got it wrong on thatIP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 5215 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted April 11, 2016 03:42 PM
I knew what you meant, LFDX!!!... I Got It! Using the word asters added an Olde World charm to it... So 'Ancient' and like past-life drift to it. IP: Logged |