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Topic: Sleeping time
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LF DX
Knowflake Posts: 288
From: Paraguay
Registered: Sep 2014
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posted June 30, 2016 01:37 AM
  
Come by and sleep honey
Let’s forget the ordeals of our town
Dream about journeys to the fiords
Where we see just the ocean and the starsI’ll kiss your cheek baby
Something tender for the night
We did too much already
It’s time to turn off the lights And the echoes of the jazz
Comes right to our ears
The swinging mods they know it
So they swing for you and me The night feels so calmly
As the soft beats of your heart
I love to have a part
Of your time, too short for many And I’ll close my eyes baby
As we embrace one more time
I hope to be here tomorrow
And not in my room, alone
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Ayelet
Knowflake Posts: 1498
From:
Registered: Sep 2010
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posted June 30, 2016 12:25 PM
It is a beautiful, streaming poem, and the way you end it is a bit surprising, showing it may all be a dream after all, all this present moment with her.IP: Logged |
mirage29
Knowflake Posts: 5659
From: us
Registered: May 2012
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posted June 30, 2016 10:27 PM
^  ....IP: Logged |
Randall
Webmaster Posts: 66552
From: Saturn next to Charmaine
Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 01, 2016 08:52 AM
I really like this.IP: Logged |
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