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Topic: Early Summer Rain
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LF DX Knowflake Posts: 375 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted December 23, 2016 04:11 PM
It’s now raining in December How it changed the landscape A little of rain does good to the soul And let the mind to daydream and escape Yes all seems different here There’s no trace of the burning heat Just the early summer rain And a dreamer walking into dead end streets I ask for a painter to paint me But the colors are dripping to the floor I forgot how it felt the rain I’d ask the skies for more Mama leave the job already And come swing with me at the park With the early summer rain Let me ignite the evening spark Cool water to heal the spirit And a dose of love to make it right I don’t care about tomorrow Let it rain for us tonight Clouds and thunder in the sky There’s no trace of the burning heat Just the early summer rain And two dreamers with their love well lit
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Ayelet Knowflake Posts: 2152 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted December 23, 2016 05:34 PM
Pretty love/nature poem, but why do you call her "mama"?IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 6790 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted December 23, 2016 06:20 PM
Yes, Beautiful... Didn't Bob Dylan use to call his partner Mama? Or was that Leonard Cohen? Sounds like a Rave, LFDX! A Love Rave?! ... Did you get back with her? IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 6790 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted December 23, 2016 06:27 PM
...(music) Summer Rain (Johnny Rivers, lyrics) [3:52] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0J1f3lvL1S8 IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 6790 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted December 23, 2016 07:07 PM
(music) Laughter in the Rain (Neil Sedaka, lyrics) [3:13] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p-uNH75pkO8 IP: Logged |
LF DX Knowflake Posts: 375 From: Paraguay Registered: Sep 2014
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posted December 24, 2016 11:35 AM
Aye and Mirage, The mama it's from Van Morrison, another great songwriter.Nope, We're apart, I'm just in a more relaxed state lately, but some stuff happened... The thing with the cancer woman affected me so badly, that it makes it almost impossible at the moment to enjoy the company of other women, and I'm meeting a lot of women lately, but I can't open myself to enjoy a more intimate bond, I'm sheltering myself too much for nothing, and it affected some relationships lately. IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 6790 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted December 24, 2016 02:23 PM
LFDX.... You have a LIFETIME of Experiences ahead of you. It's okay to take a break from women and relationships, if you need to. It's good to be able to rest, to take stock of how much you've grown over the past year. Forgive what happened or didn't happen so you can start fresh WHEN you're ready. Let time help heal you. You know, sometimes Love comes knocking at the door when we are NOT searching so hard for it to happen. It's gradual sometimes. Let things flow for you... Create Beautiful Music, Poetry, from what has occurred. Let your mind Create without the Pressure on you to BE in a relationship. Everything you experience brings you closer to what you DO want. Enjoy the 'sampler' the Universe gave you. Maybe it's like wine-tasting. You are learning about your 'tastes' in women. The women you have loved have given you something Positive to look at, if you look through that perspective. Let things heal for a while. The Future won't go away... It Awaits! Step by step... You are a Builder. (music) To All The Girls I've Loved Before (Julio Iglesias, lyrics) [3:32] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dAmrCiwNq-Y IP: Logged |
Pearlty Moderator Posts: 1556 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted December 30, 2016 09:27 AM
In the depth of winter a longing to return to summer and love.. Gorgeous poem. IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 73915 From: From a galaxy, far, far away... Registered: Apr 2009
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posted January 04, 2017 03:24 PM
Lovely.IP: Logged |