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Topic: A Poem to My Beloved
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Ayelet
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posted October 17, 2017 11:50 PM
  
A Poem to My BelovedIs the man I seek alive? Am I?
So many secrets to hold.
I am the aquarium for many a passing thought,
trapped in between here and the ocean,
looking for a way out, and thus
revealing themselves.
I would rather be
anonymous at sea
than known to all in your bedroom. I am so small, I can't see you.
Are you even alive, my God? I can feel your hand,
pulling me out of the water
for your pleasure.
I was the thought. A big wave came upon me. IP: Logged |
Randall
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From: From a galaxy, far, far away...
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posted October 18, 2017 11:27 AM
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Randall
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posted October 19, 2017 10:25 AM
Loves it.IP: Logged |
Ayelet
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posted October 19, 2017 05:01 PM
Thanks Randal  IP: Logged |
Pearlty
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From: Ohio
Registered: Jan 2012
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posted October 19, 2017 06:54 PM
Sensual & beguiling Ayelet
Very lovely read IP: Logged |
whitewitch111
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From: Hillsboro, OR, USA
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posted October 19, 2017 08:09 PM
I loved the line, "I would rather be anonymous at sea." It radiates a bewitching almost mystical and solemn tone to me. Keep writing!  You are a wonder IP: Logged |
Ayelet
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posted October 19, 2017 08:37 PM
Thank you Pearlty
Thank you for the warm words, WhiteWitch IP: Logged |
Randall
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posted October 21, 2017 02:25 PM
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Originally posted by Pearlty:
Sensual & beguiling Ayelet
Very lovely read
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mirage29
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Registered: May 2012
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posted October 21, 2017 07:59 PM
Wonderful....
It's mystical.
Aquariums... and oceans.So GOOD to see you writing again!
I love your work. IP: Logged |
Ayelet
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posted October 23, 2017 06:29 PM
Thank you, Mirage
I write a bit lately, mostly not in English.IP: Logged |
mirage29
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posted October 23, 2017 08:19 PM
Ayelet... I don't understand why your writings/poems affect me like they do. You probably are not writing 'mystically' ... but, I remember even from our first posts here, that there's 'something' about the way you write that causes me lift, and think very deep, inspirationally!!  My Beloved..... Reminds me of several things. One is a Rumi poem, the other a song from a musical. (music) Rumi, read by Madonna (sufi dancer) [3:45] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c3sMlZvDJ94 Song of Solomon
Found this video on a Hebrew Love Poem called 'Song of Solomon' (in old testament bible). Gives a rapidly paced clear breakdown of how this book is written/constructed.
(topic) Song of Solomon ('Read Scripture', book explained in illustrations) [6:58] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4KC7xE4fgOw
This is a very passionate recital of the poem.
Notes indicates this is traditionally read during the week after Passover. (topic) Song of Solomon (read aloud {old recording}, fantasy art photography) [18:42] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2UKpXl9O31w
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Randall
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From: From a galaxy, far, far away...
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posted October 24, 2017 04:39 PM
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Originally posted by mirage29:
Wonderful....
It's mystical.
Aquariums... and oceans.So GOOD to see you writing again!
I love your work.
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Ayelet
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posted October 25, 2017 02:24 AM
Mirage, dear.. Thank you for the links. I LOVE Rumi. IP: Logged |
LF DX
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From: Paraguay
Registered: Sep 2014
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posted October 26, 2017 10:40 AM
Good to see you writing again Aye!!IP: Logged |
Ayelet
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posted October 28, 2017 01:41 AM
Thank you, LF DX! I've been writing in Hebrew...IP: Logged |
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