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Ayelet
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posted June 01, 2018 02:58 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Relief

There he goes so
silent
Seldom does he weep
I adore his texture,
his manners and his wit.
But never have I seen
a monster's lie so sweet.

Tonight he shall beguile me
with his gift for words
And I'll never come around, you'll never
see my face again.
So tender are his eyes,
their pupils mock me not
His gaze upon my heart,
torn apart upon the page
Cruelly was their owner shot
by the high that has not fought
the flower bleeding in the field

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ballerina
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posted June 01, 2018 05:24 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for ballerina     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
The demons never
let me sleep,
For when I try,
They rip off the sheets...
They torment my children,
Tell me I am to blame,
Nothing has been the same.
Since the day I wanted
To create,
Of myself and my Man..
I stand strong, resilient
No, I won't be silent
Please listen to my words,
I would not change what
I've done
Because, I've already won..
The Truth is mighty
And above all
Everything I did
Was for Love...

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All my love, with all my Heart
lotusheartone/Emeraldopal

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ballerina
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posted June 01, 2018 05:28 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for ballerina     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Ayelet, wonderful poem!
Which inspired my fate.

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All my love, with all my Heart
lotusheartone/Emeraldopal

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Ayelet
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posted June 01, 2018 09:23 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Dear ballerina,
I wouldn't want you nor your loved ones to be tormented by demons, but I believe the positive words you write about winning already and doing it all for love. I hope your fate will be as bright as possible, or even as impossible... Thank you for reading and replying with a poem of your own... And I am listening to you, as I did wonder about your whereabouts. Thanks and take care

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ballerina
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posted June 02, 2018 01:44 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for ballerina     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
♥️Ayelet

You inspire me...
and thank you for
your kind words.

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All my love, with all my Heart
lotusheartone/Emeraldopal

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thequeen
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posted June 05, 2018 02:21 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for thequeen     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I love both of your's creative take

Keep sharing

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Ayelet
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posted June 07, 2018 02:24 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Hi thequeen, thank you. I'd love to see your work as well.

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Randall
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posted June 08, 2018 06:00 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

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Ayelet
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posted June 08, 2018 08:34 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Nm.

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Ayelet
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posted June 09, 2018 04:12 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thanks Randall

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Randall
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posted June 10, 2018 04:11 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
You're welcome.

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Randall
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posted July 09, 2018 10:38 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Bump!

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Pearlty
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posted July 12, 2018 02:55 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Pearlty     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

Your poem Ayelet and Ballerina’s poem
Wow.. like something other worldy

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Ayelet
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posted July 13, 2018 08:34 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote

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ballerina
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posted July 14, 2018 10:33 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for ballerina     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I truly love you all so much!

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All my love, with all my Heart
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mirage29
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posted July 16, 2018 04:41 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Ballerina *hug*

Ayelet.. I missed this one.
Relief? ..

It's a relief when those inner hauntings have finished their replay, and move on once more.

This reminds me of how past memories can come and form a wave of remembering, with all the nuances revisted .. then the blessing of 'afterwards'?

Finished-- as in it is done, and is only a thing 'of the past' which we already lived.

And, 'finished' as in the relief that happens once the association, the dream, the memory, has passed through the hallways of remembrance... while we stood still.

Thing that I noticed, is that you do not allow it 'place' in your emotions?..

I Understand. Some things are better to just let them go "bye", without shedding a tear, nor to allow self to be displaced by it once again?

That's a hard place, Ayelet.
How can we weigh the benefits of one way of dealing, against the other alternative?

Finding a way to do Both..

Thank you so much for sharing that, Ayelet!

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posted July 16, 2018 05:00 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for mirage29     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Powerful, Ayelet. Simply powerful.
I always enjoy your work.

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Ayelet
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posted July 16, 2018 07:45 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Ayelet     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Thank you kindly, Mirage.

Ballerina, your words are of all the elements. I wish you get back all the love, which you deserve.

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Randall
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posted September 01, 2018 11:43 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Randall     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Bump!

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