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Topic: Relief
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Ayelet Moderator Posts: 3682 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted June 01, 2018 02:58 AM
ReliefThere he goes so silent Seldom does he weep I adore his texture, his manners and his wit. But never have I seen a monster's lie so sweet. Tonight he shall beguile me with his gift for words And I'll never come around, you'll never see my face again. So tender are his eyes, their pupils mock me not His gaze upon my heart, torn apart upon the page Cruelly was their owner shot by the high that has not fought the flower bleeding in the field IP: Logged |
ballerina Moderator Posts: 2353 From: A Place on Earth Registered: Feb 2014
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posted June 01, 2018 05:24 AM
The demons never let me sleep, For when I try, They rip off the sheets... They torment my children, Tell me I am to blame, Nothing has been the same. Since the day I wanted To create, Of myself and my Man.. I stand strong, resilient No, I won't be silent Please listen to my words, I would not change what I've done Because, I've already won.. The Truth is mighty And above all Everything I did Was for Love...------------------ All my love, with all my Heart lotusheartone/Emeraldopal IP: Logged |
ballerina Moderator Posts: 2353 From: A Place on Earth Registered: Feb 2014
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posted June 01, 2018 05:28 AM
Ayelet, wonderful poem! Which inspired my fate.------------------ All my love, with all my Heart lotusheartone/Emeraldopal IP: Logged |
Ayelet Moderator Posts: 3682 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted June 01, 2018 09:23 AM
Dear ballerina, I wouldn't want you nor your loved ones to be tormented by demons, but I believe the positive words you write about winning already and doing it all for love. I hope your fate will be as bright as possible, or even as impossible... Thank you for reading and replying with a poem of your own... And I am listening to you, as I did wonder about your whereabouts. Thanks and take care IP: Logged |
ballerina Moderator Posts: 2353 From: A Place on Earth Registered: Feb 2014
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posted June 02, 2018 01:44 AM
♥️AyeletYou inspire me... and thank you for your kind words. ------------------ All my love, with all my Heart lotusheartone/Emeraldopal IP: Logged |
thequeen unregistered
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posted June 05, 2018 02:21 PM
I love both of your's creative take Keep sharing IP: Logged |
Ayelet Moderator Posts: 3682 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted June 07, 2018 02:24 AM
Hi thequeen, thank you. I'd love to see your work as well. IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 147975 From: I hold a Juris Doctorate (J.D.) and a Legum Magister (LL.M.)! Registered: Apr 2009
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posted June 08, 2018 06:00 PM
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Ayelet Moderator Posts: 3682 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted June 08, 2018 08:34 PM
Nm. IP: Logged |
Ayelet Moderator Posts: 3682 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted June 09, 2018 04:12 PM
Thanks Randall IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 147975 From: I hold a Juris Doctorate (J.D.) and a Legum Magister (LL.M.)! Registered: Apr 2009
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posted June 10, 2018 04:11 PM
You're welcome.IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 147975 From: I hold a Juris Doctorate (J.D.) and a Legum Magister (LL.M.)! Registered: Apr 2009
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posted July 09, 2018 10:38 AM
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Pearlty Knowflake Posts: 1950 From: Ohio Registered: Jan 2012
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posted July 12, 2018 02:55 PM
Your poem Ayelet and Ballerina’s poem Wow.. like something other worldy IP: Logged |
Ayelet Moderator Posts: 3682 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted July 13, 2018 08:34 PM
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ballerina Moderator Posts: 2353 From: A Place on Earth Registered: Feb 2014
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posted July 14, 2018 10:33 PM
I truly love you all so much!------------------ All my love, with all my Heart lotusheartone/Emeraldopal IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 14900 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted July 16, 2018 04:41 PM
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mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 14900 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted July 16, 2018 05:00 PM
I always enjoy your work. IP: Logged |
Ayelet Moderator Posts: 3682 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted July 16, 2018 07:45 PM
Thank you kindly, Mirage. Ballerina, your words are of all the elements. I wish you get back all the love, which you deserve. IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 147975 From: I hold a Juris Doctorate (J.D.) and a Legum Magister (LL.M.)! Registered: Apr 2009
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posted September 01, 2018 11:43 AM
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