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Topic: Sub-Atomic Gesture
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Ayelet
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posted January 16, 2019 05:15 PM
  
Sub-Atomic GestureThinking there's enough
Diversity
Makes me guess that
I don't belong
A face in the crowd
Non-Unique
Makes you wanna split the individual "Are you alone?"
They ask and I
Protest
What I ate is all that's left
It is what I have become
Lest I shall survive the flesh
I don't hate you, mate, I wanna
Merge
Get whole
And no more pain
Full
With your cross in my vein
Again
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ballerina
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Registered: Feb 2014
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posted January 16, 2019 07:45 PM
I love the way you write...Think of a star, it splits into
two..each unique, forever connected..
Atomic binary bond..
Two are always two..
And two can be in One,
They remain the same..
Eternally... ------------------
All my love, with all my Heart
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Pearlty
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posted January 17, 2019 05:22 PM
ayelet, makes one definitely think and ponder all the meaning found in this, varying twists on thoughts and words.. loved it! IP: Logged |
mirage29
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posted January 18, 2019 04:07 PM
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mirage29
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posted January 18, 2019 04:15 PM
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thequeen
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posted January 18, 2019 04:37 PM
Looks simple but is very deep. Another gem from your side. I loved how you described the non-uniqueness of each of us in current scenario.IP: Logged |
Ayelet
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posted January 19, 2019 06:39 PM
Thank you kindly, ballerina, Pearlty, mirage and thequeen... Ballerina, I guess somewhere two can be one, the split undone... What do you think? Mirage, I will check your links. Thanks. I once looked into Phoenix cards, I think they were called thus, and was attracted to a card which, as I've learned, was representing the medieval times... So who knows  IP: Logged |
ballerina
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posted January 19, 2019 11:26 PM
Ayelet  "two can be one,
the split undone..." I love that! ------------------
All my love, with all my Heart
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Ayelet
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posted January 20, 2019 04:10 AM
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Ayelet
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posted January 21, 2019 10:51 AM
Mirage, your original message was very interesting for me to read. Thank you IP: Logged |
mirage29
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posted January 21, 2019 06:30 PM
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Ayelet
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posted January 22, 2019 01:15 AM
Thanks, mirage, for your concern. I am as safe as I can be anywhere else, actually. And I am not insulted by religiousness. I am eclectic. Best wishes IP: Logged |
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