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Topic: Closure
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Randall Webmaster Posts: 148056 From: I hold a Juris Doctorate (J.D.) and a Legum Magister (LL.M.)! Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 25, 2019 04:43 PM
You could've met me You could've put your hand in mine You could've looked into my eyes And seen a future filled with joy You could've held me And leaned on me no matter what You should have You could've tasted lips That would never ever lie You could've felt my deep caress All through the lonely night You could've had someone Who would never do you wrong... Right where you belong Someone that you could trust Someone who'd never walk away Someone that would always stay You should have But you let me go And you didn't blink an eye... Or even cry You chose your pride You chose your fear And cast aside what could've been You could've loved me One day you could've had A love so true... Just me and you The laughs, the smiles The sharing of each day All thrown away I would've given you Everything I had I would've stuck with you Through the good times and the bad I would've held you Till the storms of life would pass... And never let you go I would've trusted you I would've never let you down I would've stayed with you No matter how tough the times would get I would've loved away your every fear I should have We could've had What poets write about We could've shared What people dream of all their lives We could've felt Something so very rare... But you didn't care We could've had everythingWe should have. IP: Logged |
Ayelet Moderator Posts: 3682 From: Registered: Sep 2010
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posted March 25, 2019 06:41 PM
Poignant, lyrical and strong, like life itself.IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 148056 From: I hold a Juris Doctorate (J.D.) and a Legum Magister (LL.M.)! Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 25, 2019 06:49 PM
Quite.IP: Logged |
Virgo-AriesArtist Knowflake Posts: 1287 From: MidWest :) Registered: Jun 2009
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posted March 30, 2019 10:07 PM
Very introspective...I like the grounded clarity of this piece, even if it is in hindsight.IP: Logged |
Randall Webmaster Posts: 148056 From: I hold a Juris Doctorate (J.D.) and a Legum Magister (LL.M.)! Registered: Apr 2009
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posted March 31, 2019 12:04 AM
20/20IP: Logged |
mirage29 Knowflake Posts: 14901 From: us Registered: May 2012
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posted September 26, 2021 04:27 PM
I didn't see this one! Such a Dedicated Soul... Pure, and A Provider
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saronna Knowflake Posts: 747 From: Australia Registered: Jan 2010
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posted September 28, 2021 02:34 PM
It's a sad poem.IP: Logged |